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Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Others believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with you. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.3

Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Others believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with you. v. 3
Friends unquestionably play a crucial role in one’s life. Although some people are of the view that it is good to select friends who do not show the difference of opinion, in my view, it is better to have friends who can show disagreement in certain situations. This essay will discuss both of these views in the forthcoming paragraphs. Admittedly, some individuals believe that friends possessing the same opinion are better because it is critical for a strong relationship. If friends always possess a difference in opinions regarding certain matters, it would weaken their friendship. That is to say, friends are the ones who always set aside their views and thoughts, and collaborate as well as understand their friends’ opinion, which, in turn, results in long-lasting relationships. A recent study, for instance, has found that youngsters who have the quality of agreeing with their friends in every situation have stronger friendship than those who do not. However, the opponents of the former view say that it is beneficial that a friend also shows disagreement in a certain situation and I agree. If an individual is taking a wrong step or decide on any unwise act, it is his friends’ responsibility to criticize him and manifest their difference of opinion regarding that matter. This would discourage a person and may alter his decision, thereby would not undergo a damaging step. A younger individual, for example, after a quarrel with his parents may decide to leave home, but if in such circumstances criticize by his friends can change his decision. In conclusion, while some people opine that a friend should be the one who does not shows the difference of opinion as it may damage the relationship, in my opinion, the difference of opinion is more beneficial in terms of guiding a friend to a right path.
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some
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friends
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who
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view
, it is better to have
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friends
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who
can
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show
disagreement in certain situations. This essay will discuss both of these
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views
in the forthcoming paragraphs.

Admittedly
,
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some
individuals believe that
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friends
possessing the same
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opinion
are better
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because
it is critical for a strong relationship. If
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friends
always possess a
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difference
in
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opinions
regarding certain matters, it would weaken their friendship.
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to say,
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friends
are the
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ones
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who
always set aside their
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views
and thoughts, and collaborate
as well
as understand their
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friends’
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opinion
, which, in turn, results in long-lasting relationships. A recent study,
for instance
, has found that youngsters
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who
have the quality of agreeing with their
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friends
in every situation have stronger friendship than those
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who
do not.

However
, the opponents of the former
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view
say that it is beneficial that a
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friend
also
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shows
disagreement in a certain situation and I
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agree
. If an individual is taking a
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wrong
step or decide on any unwise act, it is his
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friends’
responsibility to criticize him and manifest their
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difference
of
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opinion
regarding that matter. This would discourage a person and may alter his decision, thereby would not undergo a damaging step. A younger individual,
for example
, after a quarrel with his parents may decide to
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leave
home,
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but
if in such circumstances criticize by his
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friends
can
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change
his decision.

In conclusion
, while
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opine that a
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friend
should be the one
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does not
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opinion
as it may damage the relationship, in my
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opinion
, the
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difference
of
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opinion
is more beneficial in terms of guiding a
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friend
to a right path.
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IELTS essay Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Others believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with you. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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