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some people think that it is best accept bad situation, such as and unsatisfactory job or money

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As in todays time we all have to fullfill our needs and well being of family, whatever the situation is we have to take care of it. For that people have to earn or have to do work to overcome problems, rather be home sick or just don't do any work it's not the solution of any situation. Money plays an vital role in everyones life, everything depends on it our familys life, dreams and resposibility. If we see a person is not that much weathy, for example he is worker or labour. He has to fullfill all needs and have to take all resposibilities of there community. They are not earning for themeselves but for there children, they forced upon there situation. We Can't say from there face that they don't have dreams: they have too. But due lack of time and condition they bent on there nees to do work. We can see how labours are doing there work: to lift heavy weights, loading-unloading and they don't have holidays on saturdays and sundays, what they get from this much of work is just low wages as usual. In contrast, if talk about the person who is capable of investing funds, he can built a business or a organisation upon his choice. If that person don't want to work with some he can refuse it or he can just deny. Somethimes it's not wearthy to do the work that not satisfy our needs or our mind. person also thinks about the money at that time how much wages he is getting and it satisfy his needs. Foregone conclusion, it generally depends on the persons situation and there abilty. We cannot judge a person or we can't argue on this point.
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time we all
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have to
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fullfill
our needs and
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well being
of family, whatever the
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is we
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have to
take care of it. For that
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people
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have to
earn or
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have to
do
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work
to overcome problems,
rather
be home sick or
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just
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don't
do any
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work
it's not the solution of any
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. Money plays
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an
vital role in
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everyones
life, everything depends on it our
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familys
life, dreams and
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resposibility
.

If we
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see
a
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person
is not that much
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weathy
,
for example
he is worker or
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labour
. He
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has to
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fullfill
all needs and
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have to
take all
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resposibilities
of there community. They are not earning for
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themeselves
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but
for there children, they forced upon
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there
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. We Can't say from there face that they
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don't
have dreams: they have too.
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due lack of time and condition they bent on there
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nees
to do
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work
. We can
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see
how
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labours
are doing there
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work
: to lift heavy weights,
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loading-unloading and
they
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don't
have holidays on
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and
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sundays
, what they
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get
from this much of
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work
is
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just
low wages as usual.
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, if talk about the
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person
who is capable of investing funds, he can
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built
a business or
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a
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organisation
upon his choice. If that
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person
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don't
want to
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work
with
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some
he can refuse
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it or
he can
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just
deny.
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Somethimes
it's not
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wearthy
to do the
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work
that not satisfy our needs or our mind.
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person
also
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thinks
about the money at that time how
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much
wages he is getting and it
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satisfy
his needs.

Foregone conclusion, it
generally
depends on the
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persons
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situation
and there
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abilty
. We cannot judge a
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person or
we can't argue on this point.
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IELTS essay some people think that it is best accept bad situation, such as and unsatisfactory job or money

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