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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. oPQX

Climate change is one major topic around the globe, particularly that country that confronts natural catastrophe much time already. It’s starting to have a serious effect on our daily life. The way we live and behave should be accumulated to the surrounding environment in order to survive, just like species adjusting themselves to their environment. Otherwise, they either go to a better place or die from not being adaptable. I partially agree with the idea. Hence, there is 2 main reason why I think we need to find a way to live with it. First of all, the evolution of the environment is unpreventable, either for good or bad. Human keeps interacting with the environment every day, either make use of the resource which will harm the planet and later harm us, or help in protecting the environment so it will last long. However, the demand to protect the environment sometimes can’t stand the demand of people living in the world due to the overpopulations. Therefore, as people are increasing every day, so does the adjustment of the environment. Hence, we need to learn to live with it no matter what for the sake of humanity. If we can’t, a huge issue will likely emerge in the future, human’s race termination. On the other hand, not protecting nature and let it fall apart is not good either. In this modern era, people know about this issue and also learnt how to do certain thing to prevent such cases to happen. As we can see, this is one main weapon all of us can use to prevent it from happening or at least slow it down so we can adapt to the living. If we don’t prevent, the unpredictable thing is likely to happen and could kill us within a week or even day. Good enough that we are able to predict since most countries all contribute to protecting the environment. For example, the rising of the temperature. We do have the solution to that. Still, in some country, they are as hot as ever. This is happening because people care less about these problems. To sum up, finding a way to live with the environment regardless of prevuing the climate changes is one thing mankind need to have in the future. However, preventing it or at least slow down will help us better in adjusting ourselves to live with it. Adjustment takes time, and that’s why both should be depending on each other.

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change
 is one major topic around the globe, particularly
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live
 and behave should be accumulated
 to the surrounding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 in order to survive, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like species adjusting themselves to their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. Otherwise
, they either go to a better place or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :pass away
die
 from not being adaptable. I partially
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agree
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
. Hence
, there is 2 main reason why I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 we need to find a way to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 with it.

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First of all
, the evolution of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 is unpreventable, either for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
. Human This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 interacting with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 every day, either This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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use
 of the resource which will harm the planet and later harm us, or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in protecting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
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so
 it will last long. However
, the demand to protect the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
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sometimes
 can’t stand the demand of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 living in the world due to the Possible spelling mistake found.overpopulationover populations
overpopulations
. Therefore
, as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are increasing every day, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 does the adjustment of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. Hence
, we need to learn to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 with it no matter what for the sake of humanity. If we can’t, a huge issue will likely emerge in the future, human’s race termination.

On the other hand
, not protecting nature and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 it fall apart is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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people
 know about this issue and also
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 how to do certain thing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 such cases to happen. As we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
, this is one main weapon all of us can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 it from happening or at least slow it down This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we can adapt to the living. If we don’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
, the unpredictable thing is likely to happen and could kill us within a week or even day. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
Good
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 that we are able to predict since most countries all contribute to protecting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. For example
, the rising of the temperature. We do have the solution to that. Still
, in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 country, they are as hot as ever. This is happening This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 care less about these problems.

To sum up, finding a way to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 regardless of Possible spelling mistake found.pressingprovingpreyingpreeningpresumingrevving
prevuing
 the climate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 is one thing mankind need to have in the future. However
, preventing it or at least slow down will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 us better in adjusting ourselves to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 with it. Adjustment takes time, and that’s why both should The verb 'depending' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be depending
 on each other. 