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How to prevent and confront cyberattack?

How to prevent and confront cyberattack? G7Xx
Cybersecurity in this modern world, besides the banking sector which deals directly with currency, has not yet been taken care of seriously. News of a data breach, exploitation of the system such as government or any other top tier company, and more have been widespread almost every year. This is indicated that the security of the internet itself is really poor and need advancement immediately. Therefore, we need solutions or method in order to confront or prevent a cyberattack from happening. There are 5 methods which you can use on daily basis to confront and prevent such attack to happen.
Cybersecurity in this modern world,
besides
the banking sector which deals
directly
with currency, has not
yet
been taken
care of
seriously
. News of a data breach, exploitation of the system such as
government
or any other top tier
company
, and more have been widespread almost every year. This
is indicated
that the security of the internet itself is
really
poor and need advancement immediately.
Therefore
, we need solutions or method in order to confront or
prevent
a cyberattack from happening. There are 5 methods which you can
use
on daily basis to confront and
prevent
such attack to happen.
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IELTS essay How to prevent and confront cyberattack?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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