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How to prevent and confront cyberattack?

How to prevent and confront cyberattack? G7Xx

Cybersecurity in this modern world, besides the banking sector which deals directly with currency, has not yet been taken care of seriously. News of a data breach, exploitation of the system such as government or any other top tier company, and more have been widespread almost every year. This is indicated that the security of the internet itself is really poor and need advancement immediately. Therefore, we need solutions or method in order to confront or prevent a cyberattack from happening. There are 5 methods which you can use on daily basis to confront and prevent such attack to happen.

Cybersecurity in this modern world, besides
 the banking sector which deals directly
 with currency, has not yet
been taken
 care of seriously
. News of a data breach, exploitation of the system such as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 or any other top tier This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, and more have been widespread almost every year. This is indicated
 that the security of the internet itself is really
 poor and need advancement immediately. Therefore
, we need solutions or method in order to confront or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 a cyberattack from happening. There are 5 methods which you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 on daily basis to confront and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 such attack to happen. 

IELTS essay How to prevent and confront cyberattack?

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American English

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100 words

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