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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT INSTEAD OF PREVENTING CLIMATE CHANGE, WE NEED TO FIND A WAY TO LIVE WITH IT. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

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In the current time, owing to the pollution, the population of respective countries faces the major concerning issues about the environment. However, some people believe that everyone has to make habitual with climate change and learn to live with it. As per my perspective, people have to accept the story of the seasonal effect, but they also have to try to make it better. Otherwise, in the future, individuals will face natural disasters. Undoubtedly, owing to selfishness, humans easily forget beneficence and help which have been done. In the case of the environment, people generate all facilities by diminishing nature, but overuse always proves not beneficial for all. Consequently, the environmental problems are noticed in the red and alert all the world economy that if they do not preserve nature, the situation becomes bad to worst in the future time. For example, because of ozone depletion, the sun’s infrared lights directly entered the earth and provide an effect on the health of the people. In short, if people fail to the redevelopment of environment, they have to be ready for the worst natural disasters. Secondly, people do cut one’s own throat, if they avoid the topic of climate change. Because they know the points of pollution causes and effects. To control the nature problems, the government should apply some rules about vehicle usage. So, they can control the carbon content in the air, which is considered a major cause of pollution. The government of Delhi, for instance, has applied the odd and even rule in which only even number-plate vehicles can run on the even dates, and others can ride their vehicle on odd dates. In conclusion, despite people being a part of bad climate, they have to start preparation for the preservation of the environment. Otherwise, only humans will responsible for the consequences of nature. It suggests that the government should apply some restrictions to prevent climate change. Similarly, people can do plantation for the same.
In the
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current
time, owing to the pollution, the population of respective countries faces the major concerning issues about the
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environment
.
However
,
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some
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people
believe that everyone
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has to
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make
habitual with
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climate
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change
and learn to
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live
with it. As per my perspective,
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people
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have to
accept the story of the seasonal effect,
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but
they
also
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have to
try to
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make
it better.
Otherwise
, in the future, individuals will face natural disasters.

Undoubtedly
, owing to selfishness, humans
easily
forget beneficence and
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help
which have
been done
. In the case of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
,
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people
generate all facilities by diminishing
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nature
,
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but
overuse always proves not beneficial for all.
Consequently
, the environmental problems
are noticed
in the red and alert all the world economy that if they do not preserve
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
, the situation becomes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
to worst in the future time.
For example
,
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because
of ozone depletion, the sun’s infrared lights
directly
entered the earth and provide an effect on the health of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. In short, if
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people
fail to the redevelopment of
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environment
, they
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have to
be ready for the worst natural disasters.

Secondly
,
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people
do
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cut
one’s
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own
throat, if they avoid the topic of
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climate
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change
.
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Because
they know the points of pollution causes and effects. To control the
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nature
problems, the
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government
should apply
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some
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rules
about vehicle usage.
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So
, they can control the carbon content in the air, which
is considered
a major cause of pollution. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
of Delhi,
for instance
, has applied the odd and even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
in which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
even number-plate vehicles can run on the even dates,
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and others
can ride their vehicle on odd dates.

In conclusion
, despite
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people
being a part of
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bad
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climate
, they
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have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
preparation for the preservation of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
.
Otherwise
,
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only
humans will responsible for the consequences of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
. It suggests that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should apply
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some
restrictions to
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prevent
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climate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
.
Similarly
,
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people
can do plantation for the same.
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IELTS essay SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT INSTEAD OF PREVENTING CLIMATE CHANGE, WE NEED TO FIND A WAY TO LIVE WITH IT.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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