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The Picture depicts the manufacturing of instant noodles. it comprises of 8 steps from storage to sealing.

The Picture depicts the manufacturing of instant noodles. it comprises of 8 steps from storage to sealing. aA2k7

The Picture depicts the manufacturing of instant noodles. it comprises of 8 steps from storage to sealing. Overall, instant noodles manufacturing is a tedious process involving many steps and devices. To begin with, the flour is carried to storage silos with the help of a truck. It passes through a mixer with a combination of water and oil. With the help of rollers in the third stage, the mixture gets converted into dough sheets. Furthermore, these sheets then transform into long dough strips, which later get shaped into compact disc noodles in the fifth stage. In the sixth step, noodles discs are fried in cooking oil and are left for drying for some time. After which, the noodles are transferred into cups along with some vegetables and spices. The final preparation step involves labelling and sealing of cups so that the end product is ready for retail. After which, it goes to the market for later consumption.

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