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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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One of the controversial and underrated problems in the world is climate change. Despite preventing climate change, few people believes that living with the change is better. I strongly disagree that point which does no good to mankind. First of all, searching a way to live with adjustments will give the temporary peace. Its like, longer the delay, larger the consequenses are to face. Although the life of swaped climate has more benificits, the losses will be more in the future. For instance, cutting the tress and cement the soil may be helpful to build a nice dualcarriage to travel, it majorly infulence the temperature which probably makes the galciers melt. Thus, temporary comfort by living with climate change will attack the future generations. Secondly, human might be adaped by climate change, on the contrary, there is no way to accept the replacement by flora and fauna. Especially farming has huge impact in this case. For example, because of abnormal increase of heat in a particular season, time of harvest will be disturbed. Moreover, destruction of crops leads to food scarcity. So, climate change may cause an unbelievable problems in the field of agriculturs. To conclude, I strongly believe that change in climate will affect the earth in bad way where no beneifits of present and dying of crops preserves the future.
One of the controversial and underrated problems in the world is
climate
change
. Despite preventing
climate
change
, few
people
believes
that living with the
change
is better. I
strongly
disagree that point which does no
good
to mankind.

First of all
, searching a way to
live
with adjustments will give the temporary peace. Its like, longer the delay, larger the
consequenses
are to face. Although the life of
swaped
climate
has more
benificits
, the losses will be more in the future.
For instance
, cutting the tress and cement the soil may be helpful to build a nice
dualcarriage
to travel, it
majorly
infulence
the temperature which
probably
makes
the
galciers
melt.
Thus
, temporary comfort by living with
climate
change
will attack the future generations.

Secondly
, human might be
adaped
by
climate
change
,
on the contrary
, there is no way to accept the replacement by flora and fauna.
Especially
farming has huge impact
in this case
.
For example
,
because
of abnormal increase of heat in a particular season, time of harvest will
be disturbed
.
Moreover
, destruction of crops leads to food scarcity.
So
,
climate
change
may cause an unbelievable
problems
in the field of
agriculturs
.

To conclude
, I
strongly
believe that
change
in
climate
will affect the earth in
bad
way where no
beneifits
of present and dying of crops preserves the future.
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.

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