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Describe an aquatic animal

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India is a beautiful and diverse country and it has a diverse animal life. We have wild animals, domestic animals and pet animals. Here I would like to talk about an animal which is an aquatic animal. Aquatic animals sree animals those who live under water for most or all of its life time. Crocodile il a aquatic reptile. Crocodiles are well armoured body with tough avalu skin. They are Gary green or olive green with long slender snouts. It is a prehistoric looking creature. Crocodiles lives near salty water. It is distinguishable from it's cousin American Alligator. It's diet mainly consists small mammals, birds fish crab, insects etc. I saw this animal first time at national geographic channel when I was a child and I really interested to know about it because of it's physical appearance. I ask to my parents but they told me that to ask to my elder sister. She gave me a proper description about this animal. After that I saw this animal many times when I went to tours from school. At that time I understand that everyone have the same interest to know about crocodile that I have earlier and I just explain it's features to my friend. I felt very happy to share my knowledge with others and iam sure that now they have minimum knowledge about crocodile.
India is a
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beautiful
and diverse country and it has a diverse
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animal
life. We have wild
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animals
, domestic
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animals
and pet
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animals
. Here I would like to talk about an
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animal
which is an aquatic
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animal
. Aquatic
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animals
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sree
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animals
those who
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live
under water for most or all of its life
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time
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Crocodile
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il
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a
aquatic reptile.
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Crocodiles
are well
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armoured
body with tough
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avalu
skin. They are Gary green or olive green with long slender snouts. It is a prehistoric looking creature.
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Crocodiles
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lives
near salty water. It is distinguishable from
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it's
cousin American Alligator.
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diet
mainly
consists
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small
mammals, birds fish crab, insects etc. I
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saw
this
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animal
first
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time
at national geographic channel when I was a child and I
really
interested to know about it
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because
of
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it's physical appearance
. I
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ask to
my parents
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they
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me that to
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ask to
my elder sister. She gave me a proper description about this
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animal
. After that I
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saw
this
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animal
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many
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times
when I went to tours from school. At that
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time
I understand that everyone have the same interest to know about
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crocodile
that I have earlier and I
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just
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explain
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features to my friend. I felt
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very
happy to share my knowledge with others and
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iam
sure that
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now
they have minimum knowledge about
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crocodile
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IELTS essay Describe an aquatic animal

Essay
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1 paragraphs
226 words
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