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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. OG7G
More than a few people think that humanity has to accept the changes in the climate and adapt to the fluctuations of the temperatures while others argue that we have to take some preventive measures to decrease the impact of variations in global climate. However, In my opinion, we the occupants of the Earth have to start doing some preventive measures to halt the change in the climate. To begin with, the increase in the average climate of the globe has picked up more pace in recent years. This rise in temperature is because of a phenomenon called "Global warming" is due to the growing amounts of greenhouse gases like methane and carbon monoxide in the environment. And this situation had already shown its effects on this planet. For instance, the temperatures are rising, snow is melting and as a result, the sea levels are rising to make the cities on shores and coastal areas drown. Many species of animals are endangered as they lost their habitat due to the melting of snow in the poles. On the other hand, it is not easy to adapt to the consequences of climate change and it also may end up making life on earth more challenging. For example, people have been using air conditioners to sustain themselves in hot climates and heaters in order to stay warm in cold conditions, these may satisfy the needs of humans for a short time but the toxic greenhouse gases that are released as a byproduct from these machines have a devastating effect on the Ozone layer and further damaging the planet's climate. Moreover, we cannot expect the characteristics of the future climate, and assuming that we can adapt to those conditions is a kind of idea which may take us to the end of the human era. By considering all these factors, every citizen on this planet should take some preventive measures to overcome the hazard and combine ideas to invent new techniques and machinery which will harm nature less. And the thought of adapting is like planning our doom day.
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that humanity
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has to
accept the
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changes
in the
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climate
and adapt to the fluctuations of the temperatures while others argue that we
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have to
take
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some
preventive measures to decrease the impact of variations in global
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climate
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However
, In my opinion, we the occupants of the Earth
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have to
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start
doing
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some
preventive measures to halt the
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change
in the climate.

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begin
with, the increase in the average
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climate
of the globe has picked up more pace in recent years. This rise in temperature is
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because
of a phenomenon called
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Global warming
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is due to the growing amounts of greenhouse gases like methane and carbon monoxide in the environment. And this situation had already shown its effects on this planet.
For instance
, the temperatures are rising, snow is melting and
as a result
, the sea levels are rising to
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make
the cities on shores and coastal areas drown.
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Many
species of animals
are endangered
as they lost their habitat due to the melting of snow in the poles.

On the other hand
, it is not easy to adapt to the consequences of
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climate
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change
and it
also
may
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end
up making life on earth more challenging.
For example
,
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people
have been using air conditioners to sustain themselves in hot
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climates
and heaters in order to stay warm in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
conditions, these may satisfy the needs of humans for a short time
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but
the toxic greenhouse gases that
are released
as a byproduct from these machines have a devastating effect on the Ozone layer and
further
damaging the planet's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
climate
.
Moreover
, we cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
the characteristics of the future
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climate
, and assuming that we can adapt to those conditions is a kind of
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idea
which may take us to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the human era.

By considering all these factors, every citizen on this planet should take
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
preventive measures to overcome the hazard and combine
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
to invent new techniques and machinery which will harm nature less. And the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
of adapting is like planning our doom day.
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IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.

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