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Some people think that instance of preserving from climate changes, we need to find the ways to live with it.

Some people think that instance of preserving from climate changes, we need to find the ways to live with it. RR89p
The huge majority prefers to live without any distressing situations about climate crises. For all of us, it is usual lifestyle. Anyway, let’s discuss about should do it or not? First of all, let’s think what is the climate change and how it has become so popular issue for government and scientists. Since the end of 1950th, scientists’ all forecasts were about climate crises as the investigations showed how much rapidly the weather was getting warmer. It happens now too and the main consequence is the human activity. How many fossil fuel uses as carbon monoxide produces and year by year carbon recycle has become wide-ranging? Physics say the global warming brings disastrous as colossal as humankind have never thought, like when the weather increases +5C degrees, New York city and other cities are come close to the watergrounds will disappear under water. I am completely confident this will happened if we live with this kind of huge problems, instead of roll out some precautions. On the other hand, this is personal and mostly political decisions, living without and distraught about environmental catastrophes. Anyway, I disagree with living without any precautions and campaigns of protection of environment. Furthermore, each government should do the best for evolving environmentally conscious. For instance, government should decry tax system for solar panels, electric cars and natural fertilizers. The other way of struggling global warming is the launching high taxes of carbon and fuel emissions for manufactures or fabrics which produces fossil fuel. In conclusion, global warming and climate crises are crucial issues for humankind. Nevertheless, we all should do all our best for solving consequences of global warming.
The huge majority prefers to
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live
without any distressing situations about
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climate
crises. For all of us, it
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is usual
lifestyle. Anyway,
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let
’s
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discuss about should
do it or not?

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First of all
,
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think
what is the
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climate
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change
and how it has become
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so
popular issue for
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government
and scientists. Since the
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end
of 1950th, scientists’ all forecasts were about
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climate
crises as the investigations
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showed
how much
rapidly
the weather was getting warmer. It happens
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now
too and the main consequence is the human activity. How
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many
fossil fuel
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uses
as carbon monoxide produces and year by year carbon recycle has become wide-ranging? Physics say the
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global
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warming
brings disastrous as colossal as humankind have never
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thought
, like when the weather increases +5C degrees,
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New York city
and other cities are
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come
close to the
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watergrounds
will disappear under water. I am completely confident this will happened if we
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live
with this kind of huge problems,
instead
of roll out
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some
precautions.

On the other hand
, this is personal and
mostly
political decisions, living without and distraught about environmental catastrophes. Anyway, I disagree with living without any precautions and campaigns of protection of environment.
Furthermore
, each
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should do the best for evolving
environmentally
conscious.
For instance
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should decry tax system for solar panels, electric cars and natural fertilizers. The other way of struggling
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global
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warming
is the launching high taxes of carbon and fuel emissions for manufactures or fabrics which produces fossil fuel.

In conclusion
,
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global
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warming
and
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climate
crises are crucial issues for humankind.
Nevertheless
, we all should do all our best for solving consequences of
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global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
warming
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that instance of preserving from climate changes, we need to find the ways to live with it.

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4 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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