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Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. v. 2
There is no doubt that technology has been disseminated everywhere and It is believed by a segment of society that increasing communication via technology such as laptops, cell phones and so on has had a detrimental impact on reading and writing proficiency of young individuals. However, I disagree with this notion to some extent, which I intend to discuss in the subsequent paragraphs. Mobile applications and desktop software, which provide language supports, have been developed to make user's life easier, but unfortunately plays a sterling role to exacerbate their language skills. It is generally seen that youngsters these days have installed applications such as Grammarly, MS-Word in their gadgets which helps them to write correct by using auto correction tools, thereby making them oblivious about right and wrong words. Apart from this, communicating via social chatting applications, for example, WhatsApp, Facebook and so on, makes people habitant of using slang words and abbreviations which further put them in troubles while doing class presentations, colleagues group discussions and formal meetings as it becomes arduous for them to not to use informal terms. Therefore, it worsens reading and writing skills of young office workers. Communicating with the help of technology proves beneficial as software used by such devices provide hints of possible vocabulary while writing, not only improves writing skills but also increases cognitive skills of users. Moreover, ease of any time availability for chatting, owing to having mobile phones would make reading and writing skills of individuals more ameliorate. For instance, if an employee is writing an email to his or her senior on the laptop, it would be easy for one to write good and error free writing. Hence, sharing views via electronic devices boosts such skills. To conclude, although communicating with electronic gadgets have a few demerits, it seems more conducive in terms of providing lists of vocabulary lists, improving cognitive skills and easing in accessing devices helps in honing language skills of individuals.
There is no doubt that technology has
been disseminated
everywhere and It
is believed
by a segment of society that increasing communication via technology such as laptops, cell phones and
so
on has had a detrimental impact on reading and
writing
proficiency of young individuals.
However
, I disagree with this notion to
some
extent, which I intend to discuss in the subsequent paragraphs.

Mobile applications and desktop software, which provide language supports, have
been developed
to
make
user's life easier,
but
unfortunately plays a sterling role to exacerbate their language
skills
. It is
generally
seen
that youngsters these days have installed applications such as
Grammarly
, MS-Word in their gadgets which
helps
them to write correct by using
auto correction
tools, thereby making them oblivious about right and
wrong
words. Apart from this, communicating via social chatting applications,
for example
, WhatsApp, Facebook and
so
on,
makes
people
habitant of using slang words and abbreviations which
further
put them in troubles while doing
class
presentations, colleagues group discussions and formal meetings as it becomes arduous for them
to not to
use
informal terms.
Therefore
, it worsens reading and
writing
skills
of young office workers.

Communicating with the
help
of technology proves beneficial as software
used
by such devices provide hints of possible vocabulary while
writing
, not
only
improves
writing
skills
but
also
increases cognitive
skills
of users.
Moreover
,
ease
of any time availability for chatting, owing to having mobile phones would
make
reading and
writing
skills
of individuals more ameliorate.
For instance
, if an employee is
writing
an email to
his or her
senior on the laptop, it would be easy for one to write
good
and error free
writing
.
Hence
, sharing views via electronic devices boosts such
skills
.

To conclude
, although communicating with electronic gadgets have a few demerits, it seems more conducive in terms of providing lists of vocabulary lists, improving cognitive
skills
and easing in accessing devices
helps
in honing language
skills
of individuals.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
325 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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