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some people think that in this todays world getting old is entirely bad. however other people believe that the lives of older people are much better now than they were in the past discuss both point of view and express your own opinion

some people think that in this todays world getting old is entirely bad. however other people believe that the lives of older people are much better now than they were in the past discuss both point of view and express your own opinion K3laL
it is depend on people nature some think that the changes brought by modernization have made the lives of the elderly worse whereas others believe that it has improved their lives. i will discuss both views and given my opinion further. it is depend on people nature some think that the changes brought by modernization have made the lives of the elderly worse whereas others believe that it has improved their lives. i will discuss both views and given my opinion further.
it
is
depend
on
people
nature
some
think
that the
changes
brought by modernization have made the
lives
of the elderly worse whereas others believe that it has
improved
their
lives
.
i
will discuss both views and
given
my opinion
further
.
it
is
depend
on
people
nature
some
think
that the
changes
brought by modernization have made the
lives
of the elderly worse whereas others believe that it has
improved
their
lives
.
i
will discuss both views and
given
my opinion
further
.
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IELTS essay some people think that in this todays world getting old is entirely bad. however other people believe that the lives of older people are much better now than they were in the past discuss both point of view and express your own opinion

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
82 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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