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some people think that in this todays world getting old is entirely bad. however other people believe that the lives of older people are much better now than they were in the past discuss both point of view and express your own opinion

some people think that in this todays world getting old is entirely bad. however other people believe that the lives of older people are much better now than they were in the past discuss both point of view and express your own opinion K3laL
it is depend on people nature some think that the changes brought by modernization have made the lives of the elderly worse whereas others believe that it has improved their lives. i will discuss both views and given my opinion further. it is depend on people nature some think that the changes brought by modernization have made the lives of the elderly worse whereas others believe that it has improved their lives. i will discuss both views and given my opinion further.
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of the elderly worse whereas others believe that it has
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IELTS essay some people think that in this todays world getting old is entirely bad. however other people believe that the lives of older people are much better now than they were in the past discuss both point of view and express your own opinion

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82 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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