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some people think that in this todays world getting old is entirely bad. however other people believe that the lives of older people are much better now than they were in the past discuss both point of view and express your own opinion

some people think that in this todays world getting old is entirely bad. however other people believe that the lives of older people are much better now than they were in the past discuss both point of view and express your own opinion K3laL

it is depend on people nature some think that the changes brought by modernization have made the lives of the elderly worse whereas others believe that it has improved their lives. i will discuss both views and given my opinion further. it is depend on people nature some think that the changes brought by modernization have made the lives of the elderly worse whereas others believe that it has improved their lives. i will discuss both views and given my opinion further.

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 of the elderly worse whereas others believe that it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
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. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 is Consider using a past participle here: "depended".depended
depend
 on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 nature This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 brought by modernization have made the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
lives
 of the elderly worse whereas others believe that it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
lives
. Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will discuss both views and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 my opinion further
. 