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Some people think that in the future lot of changes will occur that will improve our society.

Some people think that in the future lot of changes will occur that will improve our society. aOP9
The result of development is taking place numerous people believe that life will become better. This essay discusses the reasons of beneficial change, also suggest what kind of changes will occur. The changes that are coming are a beneficial change due to the fact of two main reasons first, the development of technology which makes things easy and convenient for future and second reason is improvement in education system which helps children to get free knowledge with the help of technology. For instance, the literacy rate automatically increases and improvement in society take place. For instance, In India many youngsters are educated and communicate in international language because of good study and technological advancement. However, people nowadays think that in near future they will replace by robots in workplace etc. The entertainment industry also entertain us digitally with the help of 3D TV, games, virtual graphics etc. If the people will not familiar with technology that how to use, surely they will not take any proper advantage from technology. In future changes will not only seen in technological sector on the contrary in each and every sector of government, information, agriculture, wildlife and so on. The changes will be seen in beneficial way in near future which is essential for economy and growth of economy. In conclusion, I am totally agreed with the advancement in technology that will bring change in society and increases the welfare of the people. Things will become more easily available and each and every person can use technological equipments individually.
The result of development is taking place numerous
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people
believe that life will become better. This essay discusses the reasons of beneficial
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change
,
also
suggest what kind of
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changes
will occur.

The
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changes
that are coming are a beneficial
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change
due to the fact of two main reasons
first
, the development of
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technology
which
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makes
things easy and convenient for
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future
and second reason is improvement in education system which
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helps
children to
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get
free knowledge with the
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help
of
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technology
.
For instance
, the literacy rate
automatically
increases and improvement in society take place.
For instance
, In India
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many
youngsters
are educated
and communicate in international language
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because
of
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good
study and technological advancement.

However
,
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people
nowadays
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think
that in near
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future
they will replace by robots in workplace etc. The entertainment industry
also
entertain us
digitally
with the
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help
of 3D TV, games, virtual graphics etc. If the
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people
will not familiar with
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technology
that how to
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use
,
surely
they will not take any proper advantage from
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technology
. In
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future
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changes
will not
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only
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seen
in technological sector
on the contrary
in each and every sector of
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government
, information, agriculture, wildlife and
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so
on. The
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changes
will be
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seen
in beneficial way in near
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future
which is essential for economy and growth of economy.

In conclusion
, I am
totally
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agreed
with the advancement in
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technology
that will bring
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change
in society and increases the welfare of the
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people
. Things will become more
easily
available and each and every person can
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use
technological equipments
individually
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that in the future lot of changes will occur that will improve our society.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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