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Some people think that in order to learn a language well you must live in the country where that language is spoken.Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, learning a foreign language is having a lot of advantages and many people believe that it is necessary to travel to a country in order to learn another language. I disagree with this statement because it would be very expensive and in the modern era, the internet is best source for learning a language in their own country. Firstly, those who wish to travel to a foreign country might feel discomfort from first time, as they are not able to speak the native language and communication will be a barrier for them. Thus, to learn a new language no need not to migrate to that country as it will be expensive and people from a middle class background can’t afford it. It will directly affect the pocket of that person as they need bare expenses such as flight, accommodation, food and fees of tutor which they are going to hire. Secondly, we are living in the internet world where we can connect with everyone in just one click. There are a lot of tutorials, YouTube videos are available on the internet related to any language. Therefore, many people around the world are attending online classes to learn English or joining a class. Also, there are some person from another country who works part time as tutor and they are available online to teach language class which will benefit us and played a role of native speakers. Ultimately, it helped people to learn the language without moving to that country. In conclusion, some of the members of society believe that living abroad required to travel to the country to learn the language. In my opinion, travelling to that country is not necessary because it is very expensive, and we have a lot of resources available online that are less expensive and provide the same benefits.
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. I disagree with this statement
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language
in their
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Firstly
, those who wish to travel to a foreign
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country
might feel discomfort from
first
time, as they are not able to speak the native
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language
and communication will be a barrier for them.
Thus
, to
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learn
a new
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language
no need not
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country
as it will be
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and
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people
from a middle
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background can’t afford it. It will
directly
affect the pocket of that person as they need bare expenses such as flight, accommodation, food and fees of tutor which they are going to hire.

Secondly
, we are living in the internet world where we can connect with everyone in
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one click. There are
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tutorials, YouTube videos are available on the internet related to any
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language
.
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around the world are attending online
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English or joining a
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from another
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who works
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part time
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tutor and
they are available online to teach
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which will benefit us and played a role of native speakers.
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, it
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the
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language
without moving to that country.

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,
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some of the
members of society believe that living abroad required to travel to the
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to
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the
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language
. In my opinion, travelling to that
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country
is not necessary
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because
it is
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very
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, and we have
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a lot of
resources available online that are less
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expensive
and provide the same benefits.
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IELTS essay Some people think that in order to learn a language well you must live in the country where that language is spoken.

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4 paragraphs
305 words
5.5
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