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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

: Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. pQmw
Hosting international sports events is a great oppportunity for the country seeing many other aspects, hosting international sports increases the exposure of the country sportsperson with others and also makes them prepare even harder to keep their country's pride in front of other nations. This exposure can lead to more patriarcy of the sportsperson towards saving their nation and valuing it even more. The sportsperson become more attentive and responsible by presenting their nation with great pride in front of other countires. The event will also increase the great extent of bringing other nations to the country and serving them with a open heart along with understanding their views towards the other countries as well. For instance, when India hosts cricket matches in the stadiums of our country, the other countries who arrive are served with tons of traditional food, the environment of India and the hotels also serve indian food which the other country sportmen get to taste and understand, the players also visit the local areas and understand our culture. This increases the exposure of our country to other country sportsmen as well. Seeing the negtive aspect of hosting international sports might take a toll on the economic factors as some countries might not like our enviromnetal factors, social factors, food factors or maybe atmosphere, all these factors are taken into account as if the country spends so much money to host an international sports event and still gets criticised by other countries, it becomes a question on the pride and respect of the country which makes a wrong impact about the nation. For instance, If india hosts a badminton championship and invites the chinese players as well, as in 2020 due to covid China had spread covid-19 to the whole world which created rivalry towards china by many countries including India so due to this rivalry China might create some nuisance in our country on arrival and put our nation in some sort of trouble. Hosting an international sports is also bad due to misassumptions. Some countries who already have negative image about some other country might not be willing to take part in the event which ultimately spoils the image of the country hosting the event.
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is a great
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oppportunity
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country
seeing
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other
aspects,
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hosting
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international
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sports
increases the exposure of the
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country
sportsperson with others and
also
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makes
them prepare even harder to
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keep
their country's pride in front of
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other
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nations
. This exposure can lead to more
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patriarcy
of the sportsperson towards saving their
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nation
and valuing it even more. The sportsperson become more attentive and responsible by presenting their
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nation
with great pride in front of
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other
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countires
. The
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event
will
also
increase the great extent of bringing
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other
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nations
to the
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country
and serving them with
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a
open heart along with understanding their views towards the
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other
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countries
as well
.
For instance
, when India hosts cricket matches in the stadiums of our
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country
, the
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other
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countries
who arrive
are served
with tons of traditional food, the environment of India and the hotels
also
serve
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indian
food which the
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other
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country
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sportmen
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get
to taste and understand, the players
also
visit the local areas and understand our culture. This increases the exposure of our
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country
to
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other
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country
sportsmen
as well
.

Seeing the
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negtive
aspect of
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hosting
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international
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sports
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might
take a toll on the economic
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factors
as
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some
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countries
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might
not like our
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enviromnetal
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factors
, social
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factors
, food
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factors
or maybe atmosphere, all these
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factors
are taken
into account as if the
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country
spends
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so
much money to host an
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international
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sports
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event
and
still
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gets
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criticised
by
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other
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countries
, it becomes a question on the pride and respect of the
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country
which
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makes
a
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impact about the
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nation
.
For instance
, If
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india
hosts a badminton championship and invites the
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chinese
players
as well
, as in 2020 due to
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covid
China had spread
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covid-19
to the whole world which created rivalry towards china by
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many
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countries
including India
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so
due to this rivalry China
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might
create
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some
nuisance in our
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country
on arrival and put our
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nation
in
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some
sort of trouble.
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Hosting
an
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international
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sports
is
also
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bad
due to
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misassumptions
.
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Some
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countries
who already have
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negative
image about
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some
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other
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country
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might
not be willing to
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take part
in the
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event
which
ultimately
spoils the image of the
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country
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hosting
the
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event
.
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IELTS essay : Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
370 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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