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Write about the following topic: Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Organising an International sports occasion has positive and also negetive impact on the host country according to some people. I have a strong feeling that the host country will have more positives when compared to negative impact. Hosting a sports event shows the interest and importance the coutry is giving to sports, it also depicts that sports is being encouraged in the nation. The country will be in spot light for showing hospitality for foreign players. More and more non white collar jobs will be created, it attracts enormous number of sports enthusiasts to witness the gloreous event. Therefore, country's economy will increase. Contractingly there are disadvantages as well. This might attract illegal and terrorist activities into the country and put the nation's security at risk. Increase in visitors might cause choas in providing accodomation and hospitality. Having said that, the loop holes can be covered by proper planning and execution of plan. Securities can be increased in airports and borders to avoid anybody from entering the country illegally. Cultural competition that was conducted in my college can be an apt example in this context. By hosting the competion organising team, cultural team and supporting staff gained enourmous appreciation at the University level. Also the college donated good amount of funds which was collected from sponsors; to homeless people. More importantly, the competition attracted huge crowd of performers and also audiences. The event helped us relax from our exam pressure. In my opinion, organising an Internatiol level sports championship is great as it has more advantages than disadvantages.
Organising
an International
sports
occasion has
positive
and
also
negetive
impact on the host
country
according to
some
people
. I have a strong feeling that the host
country
will have more positives when compared to
negative
impact.

Hosting a
sports
event
shows
the interest and importance the
coutry
is giving to
sports
, it
also
depicts that
sports
is
being encouraged
in the nation. The
country
will be in
spot light
for showing hospitality for foreign players. More and more
non white
collar jobs will
be created
, it attracts enormous number of
sports
enthusiasts to witness the
gloreous
event
.
Therefore
, country's economy will increase.

Contractingly
there are disadvantages
as well
. This might attract illegal and terrorist activities into the
country
and put the nation's security at
risk
. Increase in visitors might cause
choas
in providing
accodomation
and hospitality. Having said that, the
loop holes
can
be covered
by proper planning and execution of plan. Securities can
be increased
in airports and borders to avoid anybody from entering the
country
illegally
.

Cultural competition that
was conducted
in my college can be an apt example in this context. By hosting the
competion
organising
team, cultural team and supporting staff gained
enourmous
appreciation at the University level.
Also
the college donated
good
amount of funds which
was collected
from sponsors; to homeless
people
. More
importantly
, the competition attracted huge crowd of performers and
also
audiences. The
event
helped
us relax from our exam pressure.

In my opinion,
organising
an
Internatiol
level
sports
championship is great as it has more advantages than disadvantages.
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IELTS essay : Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
258 words
5.5
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