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Some people think that governments should provide unemployed citizens with free telephones and opportunities for using internet to help them to find a job. What to extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that governments should provide unemployed citizens with free telephones and opportunities for using internet to help them to find a job. What to extent m1BWN
In this modern era, the issue of unemployment has been increasing in demographics of society. Some people assert that regime is responsible for providing the free mobile phone and other technological devices to the unemployed. I partially agree with this notion. To commence with, if the rate of employment will increase, eventually it ought to effect the economy of the country, so the government plays an important role to lower the unemployment. Since government have access to everything in the country, they should provide the free communication decives to folks looking for job. For instance, students who complete their degrees with scholarships have knowledge but they can not afford the internet resources to look for job, as all big compaines post jobs on internet. Provided that, it is inevitable to have telecommunications devices and access to technology to find employment. On the other hand, it is not completely government responsibility to provides resources because they have bigger issues to solve. Furthermore, students who are in college or university, they should attend the seminars and workshops to find the job because phone is not required to get employed. Moreover, it is possible to use college or public library laptops and computer to look for job, owing to libraries and college display boards post jobs to hire part time and full time Employees. All in all, it can be said that government should organize workshops and seminars for people looking for job and people should attend them if they can not afford the technological facilities. To add, providing underprivileged people telephones is another way to lower the unemployment rate.
In this modern era, the issue of unemployment has been increasing in demographics of society.
Some
people
assert that regime is responsible for providing the free mobile phone and other technological devices to the unemployed. I
partially
agree
with this notion.

To commence with, if the rate of employment will increase,
eventually
it ought to effect the economy of the country,
so
the
government
plays an
important
role to lower the unemployment. Since
government
have access to everything in the country, they should provide the free communication
decives
to folks looking for
job
.
For instance
, students who complete their degrees with scholarships have knowledge
but
they can not afford the internet resources to look for
job
, as all
big
compaines
post
jobs
on internet. Provided that, it is inevitable to have telecommunications devices and access to technology to find employment.

On the other hand
, it is not completely
government
responsibility to provides resources
because
they have bigger issues to solve.
Furthermore
, students who are in college or university, they should attend the seminars and workshops to find the
job
because
phone is not required to
get
employed.
Moreover
, it is possible to
use
college or public library laptops and computer to look for
job
, owing to libraries and college display boards post
jobs
to hire
part time
and full time

Employees.

All in all, it can
be said
that
government
should organize workshops and seminars for
people
looking for
job
and
people
should attend them if they can not afford the technological facilities. To
add
, providing underprivileged
people
telephones
is another way to lower the unemployment rate.
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IELTS essay Some people think that governments should provide unemployed citizens with free telephones and opportunities for using internet to help them to find a job. What to extent

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