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is advertising successful or no longer pay attention to?

is advertising successful or no longer pay attention to? oRPVB
The view of successful, the product would sold more and more and company could be rich. Others aspects for example, by watching advatising for enormous people, not only products but also company's name would be more famous. Advertising is made by company who want to sell domestic products, so advertising must give watchers for good images like good quality and delicious even the good attitude for environmental problems. Advertising told us, If you don't buy this, you would be the looser. The view of advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Yes, I want to strongly agree this opinion. We already know the company's aim like becomeing the common and deliverly fantastic images. I do not act what they want to. When you buy the product, why don't you watch net reviews? There is some reliable websites on the internet. When I buy new things, I check customers' review everytime. Now, I hate advertising mot only on the TV but also internet.
The view of successful, the
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would
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sold
more and more and
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company
could be rich.

Others aspects
for example
, by watching
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advatising
for enormous
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people
, not
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only
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products
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but
also
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company
's name would be more
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famous
.

Advertising
is made
by
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company
who want to sell domestic
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products
,
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so
advertising
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must
give watchers for
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good
images

like
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good
quality and delicious even the
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good
attitude for environmental problems.

Advertising
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told
us, If you don't
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buy
this, you would be the looser.

The view of advertising is
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so
common that we no longer pay attention to it.

Yes, I want to
strongly
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agree
this opinion.

We already know the
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company
's aim like
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becomeing
the common and
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deliverly
fantastic images.

I do not act what they want to.

When you
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buy
the
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product
, why don't you
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watch
net reviews?

There is
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some
reliable websites on the internet.

When I
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buy
new things, I
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check
customers' review
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everytime
.

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Now
, I hate advertising mot
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only
on the TV
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but
also
internet.
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IELTS essay is advertising successful or no longer pay attention to?

Essay
  American English
12 paragraphs
167 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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