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Some people think that global warming should be delete by government while others think that it is responsibility of individual.describe both view and give your opinion.

Some people think that global warming should be delete by government while others think that it is responsibility of individual. describe both view and give your opinion. GWqDw
Some people had opinion that global warming should be delete by government. While some other has view that it can be done individually. This essay will illustrate that how global warming can be eleminated either by government or by people themselves. In the begin it is think of many people that global warming should be delete by government. Global warming is increase in temperature of earth due to use of vehicles and other human activities like burning of fossil fuels. This can be delete by government if government encourage the use of public transportation as when use of personal cars, motor bikes decrease then altimately the smoke also decrease and as result the temperature also decreases.
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government
.
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Global
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warming
is increase in temperature of earth due to
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use
of vehicles and other human activities like burning of fossil fuels. This can be
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delete
by
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government
if
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government
encourage the
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IELTS essay Some people think that global warming should be delete by government while others think that it is responsibility of individual. describe both view and give your opinion.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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