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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Undergraduate degree is believed to be a prime way to secure a higher position in a reputed company, while others hold that work experience is more important, and entering in to work force right away would therefore be a better option. This essay agrees that the potential of an undergraduate to become a qualified professional is higher than a person who terminates the education at secondary school. These days more and more adolescents are willing to enter a university on account of a huge number of job opportunities they have after passing out. In other words, employers prefer to hire qualified graduates with specialized knowledge for higher positions in their industries, therefore, this drive ensures well-paid jobs for university students. In addition to the job security, professionals are always high wage earners and are offered attractive fringe benefits such as comprehensive medical insurance. So, holding a degree is advantageous in terms of one’s professional life, as companies do not have a will to employ unqualified people for higher-tier jobs. Conversely, some believe in experience at work rather than undergraduate qualification, when finding a job. Of course, early engagement in work aids in developing a number of life skills, such as autonomy, teamwork and accountability, which are important tools of a successful professional life. However, these tools alone would not be sufficient to guarantee a high-rank job because employers always seek qualifications than experiences, and that is why these people often propel to low-tier jobs with low salaries. This is supported by a recent study conducted at Oxford University, in which they claim that 95% of unqualified workers struggle to pay bills because they cannot make ends meet. A university degree is thereby vital if one needs to secure a job. While some people believe in undergraduate degree, others rely on experience as the best qualification to enter in to the job market. Pursuing a degree is the best to achieve this as the main focus of the employers is qualifications. On the other hand, although having a job early offers some soft skills, they are alone insufficient to fulfill employer’s requirements.
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experience
is more
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important
, and entering in to
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force right away would
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agrees
that the potential of an
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undergraduate
to become a qualified
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professional
is higher than a person who terminates the education at secondary school.

These days more and more adolescents are willing to enter a
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university
on account of a huge number of
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job
opportunities they have after passing out. In
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other
words,
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employers
prefer to hire qualified graduates with specialized knowledge for higher positions in their industries,
therefore
, this drive ensures well-paid
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jobs
for
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university
students.
In addition
to the
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job
security,
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professionals
are always high wage earners and
are offered
attractive fringe benefits such as comprehensive medical insurance.
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So
, holding a
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degree
is advantageous in terms of one’s
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professional
life, as
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companies
do not have a will to employ unqualified
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people
for higher-tier jobs.

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,
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some
believe in
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experience
at
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rather
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undergraduate
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qualification
, when finding a
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job
.
Of course
, early engagement in
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work
aids in developing a number of life
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skills
, such as autonomy, teamwork and accountability, which are
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important
tools of a successful
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professional
life.
However
, these tools alone would not be sufficient to guarantee a high-rank
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job
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because
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employers
always seek
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qualifications
than
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experiences
, and
that is
why these
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people
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often
propel to low-tier
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jobs
with low salaries. This
is supported
by a recent study conducted at Oxford
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University
, in which they claim that 95% of unqualified workers struggle to pay bills
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because
they cannot
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ends
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university
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is thereby vital if one needs to secure a job.

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some
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people
believe in
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degree
, others rely on
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experience
as the best
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qualification
to enter in to the
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job
market. Pursuing a
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degree
is the best to achieve this as the main focus of the
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employers
is
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qualifications
. On the
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other
hand, although having a
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job
early offers
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some
soft
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skills
, they are alone insufficient to fulfill
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employer’s
requirements.
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IELTS essay Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.

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