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Some people think that for individuals, planning for the future is a waste of tms 5 more important for individuals to focus on the present Do you agree or disagree?

Concerning the issue of whether individuals should plan for the future or focus on the present. I believe that individuals definitely must plan for the future due to the following reasons. Planning for the future has a wealth of benefits. To start off with, a future-oriented person possesses more clear objectives and incentives. t is a well-known fact that individuals who have goals know what they want, thereby having more certainty in life. The second benefit is planning for the future motivates the individual. As a matter of fact, most people’s motivation comes from their vision Above all, planning for the future makes a person’s development more sustainable. Indeed, without a future plan, even successful people may feel disoriented and cannot understand why they want to be successful; as a result, they may not be able to enjoy their success. I recognise that focusing on the present can reduce distractions and temptations. This is reasonable to the extent that focusing on the present makes a person more organized However, having said this, planning for the future is still not a waste of time because lack future plans might result in irresponsible and unhealthy lifestyles. In conclusion, I would argue that designing a future plan is much more important that focusing on the present. Accordingly, it would be generally advisable for individuals to plan for their future first.
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for the
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or focus on the
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. I believe that
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due to the following reasons.

Planning for the
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has a wealth of benefits. To
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start
off with, a future-oriented person possesses more
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clear
objectives and incentives. t is a well-known fact that individuals

who have goals know what they want, thereby having more certainty in life. The second

benefit is planning for the
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future
motivates the
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individual
. As a matter of fact, most
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people
’s

motivation
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comes
from their vision
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, planning for the
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future
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makes
a person’s

development more sustainable.
Indeed
, without a
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future
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, even successful
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people
may feel

disoriented and cannot understand why they want to be successful;
as a result
, they may not

be able to enjoy their success.

I recognise that focusing on the
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present
can
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reduce
distractions and temptations. This is

reasonable to the extent that focusing on the
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present
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makes
a person more organized

However
, having said this, planning for the
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future
is
still
not a waste of time
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because
lack

future
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plans
might result in irresponsible and unhealthy lifestyles.

In conclusion
, I would argue that designing a
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future
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plan
is much more
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that

focusing on the
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present
.
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, it would be
generally
advisable for
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individuals
to plan

for their
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first
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IELTS essay Some people think that for individuals, planning for the future is a waste of tms 5 more important for individuals to focus on the present

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