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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Npyy
Environmental issues should be solved on a global scale and improved by people with their contribution. Both aspects we will discuss about later on. Firstly, environmental problems is solved day by day for the contribution of peoples and society to take innitiate to improve them. People now knows how environment neat and clean benifical for us. For example- we keep healthy, disease less and so on. On the other hand, others believe that it is better to deal with nationally. Conclusively, the conclude both aspects paly a virtual role. Both impact and their opinion also valuable.
Environmental issues should
be solved
on a global scale and
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improved
by
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people
with their contribution. Both aspects we will
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discuss about later
on.
Firstly
, environmental problems
is solved
day by day for the contribution of peoples and society to take
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innitiate
to
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improve
them.
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People
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now
knows how environment neat and clean
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benifical
for us.
For example
- we
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keep
healthy, disease less and
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so
on.
On the other hand
, others believe that it is better to deal with
nationally
.
Conclusively
,
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the conclude
both aspects
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paly
a virtual role. Both impact and their opinion
also
valuable.

IELTS essay Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.

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