Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. PVWPK
In modern period, there has been a great increment in a large category of people considering that the raising environmental problems have to be solved global whereas others argue that solving nationally is a proper way. as such, these both views are suitable to apply, although I opine the former one. To begin with, they are numerous arguments favouring of solving environmental problems on a global level. The most preponderant one is that the environment can be protected equally all around the globe. It cannot only contribute to make people aware about overuse of natural resources but also leads to a wide array of benefits in almost all areas of life. Similarly, running global programs help to increase universal brotherhoodness and make people to involved in their desired work. For instance, on June 5, people gather all around the globe and celebrate ' World Environment Day' with harmony and conduct programs to protect nature. Needless to say, all these upsides stand in a good position when it comes to achieving excellence in various fields. However, others believe that there are more significant ways to eradicate such problems in national level rather than globally. The predominant one is that citizens can be made aware by conducting awareness throughout the country in their own language which helps to understand more in details so that misunderstanding is not likely to be happen. Also, people can suggest affectable solutions to the government to protect the nature. Nepal, for instance, has its own site since 2010 where people can give their own views about environmental protection and run program accordingly. Hence, it is apparent why some people are in favour of this. From what has been discussed above, it can unarguably be concluded that, in my opinion, although both ways can be effective, the overwhelming benefits of running program globally are indeed too great to ignore.
In modern period, there has been a great increment in a large category of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
considering that the raising environmental problems
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
be solved
global whereas others argue that solving
nationally
is a proper way.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
as
such, these both views are suitable to apply, although I opine the former one.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, they are numerous arguments
Possible spelling mistake. 'favouring' is British English.
favouring
of solving environmental problems on a global level. The most preponderant one is that the environment can
be protected
equally
all around the globe. It cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
contribute to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
aware about overuse of natural resources
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
leads to a wide array of benefits in almost all areas of life.
Similarly
, running global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
programs
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to increase universal
Possible spelling mistake found.
brotherhoodness
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to involved in their desired work.
For instance
, on June 5,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
gather all around the globe and celebrate
Don't put a space on both sides of a quote symbol
'
World Environment Day' with harmony and conduct
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
programs
to protect nature. Needless to say, all these upsides stand in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
position when it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to achieving excellence in various fields.

However
, others believe that there are more significant ways to eradicate such problems in national level
rather
than globally. The predominant one is that citizens can
be made
aware by conducting awareness throughout the country in their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
language which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to understand more in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that misunderstanding is not likely to be
Consider using a past participle here: "happened".
happen
.
Also
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can suggest
Possible spelling mistake found.
affectable
solutions to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to protect the nature. Nepal,
for instance
, has its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
site since 2010 where
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can give their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
views about environmental protection and run
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
program
accordingly
.
Hence
, it is apparent why
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are in
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
of this.

From what has
been discussed
above, it can
unarguably
be concluded
that, in my opinion, although both ways can be effective, the overwhelming benefits of running
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
program
globally are
indeed
too great to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignore
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Some people think that environmental problems should be solved a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Some people think that environmental problems should be solved a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.