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Some people think that e-learning is better.others think that study at schools has more advantages.discuss both views and give your opinion??

Some people think that e-learning is better. others think that study at schools has more advantages. ? R5lNk
Being a well educated, without any qualms, education play vital role in every human being life. it become debatable issue among the commoners, whether online education is fruitful for individuals or not. This essay will discuss not only the both point of view but also my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, there are myriad of reasons why e-study is beneficial for human whether they are children or adults as it can be seen in the modern era, most of the commoners has hectic schedule for fullfilling their needs and not have enough time to go in the schools as well as colleges. with the help of this, they can easily do their study anytime and everewhere because its is less expensive and help to complete dreams. For example, recent survey conducted by some experts revealed that almost 60% inhabitants preferred to done their study via online websites by which they earned money plus complete their edification course. As a result, it will become a win-win situation for both scholars along with workers. On the paradoxical side, study in schools and universities has plethora of advantages instead of online portals. First and Foremost is that understanding because in the schools and with the help of teachers, students can easily grab any kind of information plus they can discuss thier obstacles with not only their classmates but also with their tutor. apart from it, teacher can also check the level of the learners and provide help acoording to need since schools take exams and tests for checking the level in which they can check their identity which is not posible on the internet. for instance, it is reality that majority of the inhabitants cannot solve the difficult equations of mathematics subject in which teacher always involved to solve it. Consequently, they can take the feedback and obtain the physical experience. To conclude, after considering the all phenomenon of this trend, although e-study has more and more ideas and extra information, yet according to my prespective, offline study is much better because real life tests can check by the exams plus teachers.
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debatable issue among the commoners, whether online education is fruitful for individuals or not. This essay will discuss not
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my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

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its is less expensive and
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to complete dreams.
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some
experts revealed that almost 60% inhabitants preferred to done their
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study
via online websites by which they earned money plus complete their edification course.
As a result
, it will become a win-win situation for both scholars along with workers.

On the paradoxical side,
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study
in
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schools
and universities has plethora of advantages
instead
of online portals.
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and Foremost is that understanding
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in the
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schools
and with the
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of
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their classmates
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their identity which is not
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instance, it is reality that majority of the inhabitants cannot solve the difficult equations of mathematics subject in which
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always involved to solve it.
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, they can take the feedback and obtain the physical experience.

To conclude
, after considering the all phenomenon of this trend, although e-study has more and more
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ideas
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according to my
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is much better
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real life
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tests
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by the exams plus
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teachers
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IELTS essay Some people think that e-learning is better. others think that study at schools has more advantages. ?

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