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Education. Children and education

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The education of children creates many contrast between the educators like parents, teachers and others. They have different roles in the child education, but they have to work together in order to have the best result. School has a very important role in the growth of the child and teachers have to be both sweet and serious at the same time. The child has to have fun, but has to learn to follow the rules too. This is important even in the house environment. The parents must be tolerance letting the baby playing and joking, but at the same time they have to be more rigid when the child ha doing something bad. It’s important that children stay a lot of time between others children and learn how link toys and other things with them. The union of these aspects is the base for a good children education.
The education of
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between the educators like parents, teachers
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different
roles in the
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child
education,
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they
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have to
work together in order to have the best result. School has a
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very
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important
role in the growth of the
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child
and teachers
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have to
be both sweet and serious at the same time. The
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child
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has to
have fun,
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but
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has to
learn to follow the
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rules
too. This is
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important
even in the
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house
environment. The parents
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must
be tolerance letting the baby playing and joking,
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but
at the same time they
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have to
be more rigid when the
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child
ha doing something
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bad
. It’s
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important
that
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children
stay
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a lot of
time between others
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children
and learn how link toys and other things with them. The union of these aspects is the base for a
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good
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education.
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IELTS essay Education. Children and education

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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