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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience..

Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. . jKw8
It has been argued that developed countries should take one step ahead to fight against climate change. Others believe that other countries are equally responsible to save environment. In my opinion, developed nations carries more responsibilities to protect environment as they are far ahead in terms of pollution. I will share my point of views in upcoming paragraphs. First and foremost, Developed countries are financially capable to explore new resources which can reduce pollution. Such countries economy plays vital role in protecting nature. For example, many countries started using natural resource to produce electricity from water and wind. They invented latest technology which can help in decreasing air pollution and water pollution. Moreover, using electric cars reduce noise pollution. Such inventions helps to fight against global warming and it can only possible for developed countries. On the other hand, developing countries are struggling to manage their own financial needs. People are not much educated and aware in protecting environment and they should understand that they will get affected more with environmental changes. Climate change is a global problem thus developing countries are equally responsible to fight against such changes. Developing countries should follow the foot step encourage their own people to protect our surrounding. To sum up, every country is accountable to fight against climate change, however developed countries should take a lead and set example for developing counties and this how we can make earth better place to live for everyone. We all are equally responsible to save the nature.
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been argued
that
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countries
should take one step ahead to
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fight
against climate
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change
. Others believe that other
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countries
are
equally
responsible to save environment. In my opinion,
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developed
nations carries more responsibilities to protect environment as they are far ahead in terms of
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pollution
. I will share my point of views in upcoming paragraphs.

First
and foremost,
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Developed
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countries
are
financially
capable to explore new resources which can
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reduce
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pollution
. Such
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countries
economy plays vital role in protecting nature.
For example
,
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many
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countries
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started
using natural resource to produce electricity from water and wind. They invented
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latest
technology which can
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help
in decreasing air
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pollution
and water
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pollution
.
Moreover
, using electric cars
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reduce
noise
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pollution
. Such inventions
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helps
to
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fight
against global warming and it can
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only
possible for
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developed
countries.

On the other hand
,
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developing
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countries
are struggling to manage their
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own
financial needs.
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People
are not much educated and aware in protecting
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environment and
they should understand that they will
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get
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affected
more with environmental
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changes
. Climate
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change
is a global problem
thus
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developing
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countries
are
equally
responsible to
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fight
against such
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changes
.
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Developing
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countries
should follow the foot step encourage their
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own
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people
to protect our surrounding.

To sum up, every
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country
is accountable to
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fight
against climate
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change
,
however
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developed
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countries
should take a lead and set example for
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developing
counties and this how we can
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make
earth better place to
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live
for everyone. We all are
equally
responsible to save the nature.
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IELTS essay Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. .

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