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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others disagree. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others disagree. Give reasons and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. JoYBj
Dangerous sports are vulnerable to injury and fatal death. Some people reckon that grievous games should be prohibited while others oppose it. I completely agree that dangerous sports should be prevented. Perilous sports can help people to overcome their fear and discover potential talents and special abilities. Moreover, people try hazardous games to experience strong feelings apart from boring daily routine. In addition, getting involved with an extreme sport is a great way to have fun while maintaining a healthy body weight. Besides, parlous games are more interesting, exciting and helps. . .
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help
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to overcome their fear and discover potential talents and special abilities.
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people
try hazardous games to experience strong feelings apart from boring daily routine.
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, getting involved with an extreme
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sport
is a great way to have fun while maintaining a healthy body weight.
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, parlous games are more interesting, exciting and
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IELTS essay Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others disagree. Give reasons and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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