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Nowadays there are many traffic jams that cause long delays on the roads Why is this happening Suggest a solution to the problem

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In this modern world, it is undeniable that there is more travel time on the road due to heavy traffic. There are many car and truck users are increased on the roads however encouraging public transport can reduce the traffic jam which cuts down long travel time. To begin, increase of car manufacturer result in more productivity and selling of cars. Due to the overpopulation use of the car is increased rapidly. Some people think that it is prestige to go by expensive large car then only others will respect. Moreover, raise in no of trucks and heavy vehicles indefinetly cause of traffic cong. . .
In this modern world, it is undeniable that there is more travel time on the road due to heavy traffic. There are
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IELTS essay Nowadays there are many traffic jams that cause long delays on the roads Why is this happening Suggest a solution to the problem

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  American English
2 paragraphs
106 words
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