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Some people think that cooking is the important skill and schools should teach cooking to boys and girls. Other think that cooking is just waste of time for boys and girls. Discuss the both view and provide your opinion.

Some people think that cooking is the important skill and schools should teach cooking to boys and girls. Other think that cooking is just waste of time for boys and girls. Discuss the both view and provide your opinion. L9aA6
In this epoch, Cooking is a basic skill. Numbers of people believe that both genders should learn this skill from their school while rest of people think the can ruin their precious time. In this essay we will discuss that cooking is essential skill for human and every boys and girls should in the schools including other knowledge such as mathematics, science, art etc. Parents wants the their children get the all type of information and become independent. Moreover, it could be their profession in the future. For example master chef programme runing all around the globe. Therefore, they should learn this basic skill. Other side people believe that getting knowledge of parparing meal can be ruin the valuable time of their childern. There are more burden on childern as they are studing so many burden by learning other kind of subjects. In conclusion, however cooking is important to learn and basic experience that should learn into school it also can be burden on pupils. In my opinion, perparing food is the basic learning and it should learn into school but it could not be compulsory for everyone.
In this epoch, Cooking is a
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people
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learn
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skill
from their
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school
while rest of
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people
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think
the can ruin their precious time. In this essay we will discuss that cooking is essential
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skill
for human and every
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boys
and girls should in the
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schools
including other knowledge such as mathematics, science, art etc.

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the all type of information and become independent.
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, it could be their profession in the future.
For example
master chef
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programme
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runing
all around the globe.
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, they should
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learn
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basic
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. Other side
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believe that getting knowledge of
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parparing
meal can be ruin the valuable time of their
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as they are
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studing
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burden by learning other kind of subjects.
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important
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learn
and
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experience that should
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learn
into
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school
it
also
can be burden on pupils. In my opinion,
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perparing
food is the
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learning and it should
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school
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but
it could not be compulsory for everyone.
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IELTS essay Some people think that cooking is the important skill and schools should teach cooking to boys and girls. Other think that cooking is just waste of time for boys and girls. Discuss the both view and provide your opinion.

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