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Some people think that companies should produce products durable. Others think that they should be as cheap as possible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that companies should produce products durable. Others think that they should be as cheap as possible. MMXme
products make human life work easy and enjoyable. every individual purchase various product through life and every produce has price different plus quality variation. based on their budget and requirement individual buy product. branded product has batter performance and heigher price, But it gives long life service. on the other hand, cheap products fit in the budget but the quality is also non-standard. many individual do favor that manufacturer build not only quality product but also realiable for long turm products. Also, this productsnot only reduce environment vest but also save energy and time. durable items have been built with standerd and height quality material which eventually increase product prise. Branded shoes, clothes and electronics items are both long-lasting and more comfortable. I had bought shoes from Nike brand 7 years ago which gives me extreme comfort whenever is I wear them and playing games. while others thiks that products should be less in prices because it fits in thie budget. It normaly have very bad material used and quality of product also have very non-standard. persond need to buy them frequents because it's quality deteriorate quickly or product brock. In market may cheap electronic products are available such as headphones, LED lights. this type of headphones gives not only give very ugly sound effect but also damage a phone. looking at both sides, I can preafure branded and durable product because it not only gives better quality of product but also mitigates environmental vest. using and purchasing cheap products give you vast options while buying but it's not surve batter experience.
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products
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make
human life work easy and enjoyable.
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every
individual
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purchase
various
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product
through life and every produce has price
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different
plus
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quality
variation.
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based
on their budget and requirement individual
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buy
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product
.
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branded
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product
has batter performance and
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heigher
price,
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But
it
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gives
long life service.
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on
the other hand,
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cheap
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products
fit in the budget
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but
the
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quality
is
also
non-standard.

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many
individual do favor that manufacturer build not
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only
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quality
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product
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but
also
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realiable
for long
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turm
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products
.
Also
, this
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productsnot
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only
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reduce
environment vest
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but
also
save energy and time.
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durable
items have
been built
with
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standerd
and height
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quality
material which
eventually
increase
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product
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prise
. Branded shoes, clothes and electronics items are both long-lasting and more comfortable. I had
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bought
shoes from Nike brand 7 years ago which
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gives
me extreme comfort whenever is I wear them and playing games.

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while
others
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thiks
that
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products
should be less in prices
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because
it fits in
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thie
budget. It
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normaly
have
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very
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bad
material
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used
and
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quality
of
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product
also
have
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very
non-standard.
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persond
need to
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buy
them frequents
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because
it's
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quality
deteriorate
quickly
or
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product
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brock
. In market may
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cheap
electronic
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products
are available such as headphones, LED lights.
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this
type of headphones
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gives
not
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only
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give
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very
ugly sound effect
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but
also
damage a phone.

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looking
at both sides, I can
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preafure
branded and durable
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product
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because
it not
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only
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gives
better
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quality
of
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product
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but
also
mitigates environmental vest.
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using
and purchasing
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cheap
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products
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give
you vast options while buying
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but
it's not
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surve
batter experience.
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IELTS essay Some people think that companies should produce products durable. Others think that they should be as cheap as possible.

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