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Some people think that climate change has negative impact on businesses while other think that it provides more options for business discuss both view give your opinion

Some people think that climate change has negative impact on businesses while other think that it provides more options for business discuss both view give your opinion 1rDn
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Environmental issues have been a matter of great concern over the last few decades a like
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climate
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having
enduring impacts on
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business
in unlike directions in my opinion ecological and balance bring both threats and
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opportunity
to an enterprise action of justified argument
are depicted
by incent paragraphs melting of glaciers have been devastating effect on
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climate
and
further
on
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business
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opportunity
summer season trending to be more hot and expanded creative for light outfits production
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houses
and Indian
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Handloom
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Industries
cloth
for instance
in
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Panipat
textile
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industry
in Haryana
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people
indigent
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Handloom
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industries
are depreciating and workforce
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Montu
other source of occupation frequent
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climate
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changes
boost new
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industry
to embark in the market of new
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many
days needed to justify
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Industries
Delhi electronic appliances like air conditioner or water heater manage to detect
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opportunities
and earn higher profit during particular season agriculture being the primary source of occupation and
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having
Epic market for Organic products
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opportunities
turns into a threat
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because
of seasonal
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climate
stability in countries
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having
similar
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climate
throughout the year less likely to those countries which experience where did
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climate
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changes
during the year 2 example in Dubai there
is limited
in
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Amrit
of
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business
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organisation
insect dates export on it to called continents which limits its approach to
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globalisation
chapter
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climate
result in several natural disasters which Divas traits successful Enterprise in a dialect area an instance hurricane in Australia ruin everything
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but
depletion of Ozone layer can be
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favourable
for sunscreen
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industries
in culmination
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business
counter and running effect of
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climate
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changes
not able e impact are
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positive
and create
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opportunities
for new
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business
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having
said that it harms
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several cooperation
and provided to be indomitable troubles
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IELTS essay Some people think that climate change has negative impact on businesses while other think that it provides more options for business discuss both view give your opinion

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
282 words
5.5
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