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Some people think that cities are the best places to live Others prefer to live in a rural area Compare the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from v.2

Some people think that cities are the best places to live Others prefer to live in a rural area Compare the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside 2
Many people consider living in the large town, whereas other opinions choose the countryside as their place to live. In this essay, I would describe the goods and the drawbacks of having a life in the rural area or city. There are two advantages of living in the metropolitan area. To begin with, why many people do urbanization is because it is offering us many great jobs and higher income. They could only find activities that related to farm if living in the village, while actually, they have abilities to develop something different. The next one is transportations and infrastructure are accessible easily. When spending life in the rural region, usually people have struggle like the difficulty in finding bus if they want to take a trip or go to a hospital. However, many options of intra-city mobility could be found as easy as pie and the bumpy road is not as much as in the small town. On the other hand, be settled in the country also have two two main benefits. First, mostly the villagers are more friendly, they know each other even people who live more than ten houses from them. For example, people in my hometown always have a talk every morning or afternoon and say hi if meet without stopping, including strangers. Thus, this makes people never feel alone. but it is different to societies in the urban neighborhood that is cynical to others. Second, people would breathe fresh air which we can not buy and closer to nature. It could happen because there are plenty of huge trees and not much the traffic or the industrial noises. Additionally, kinds of vegetables could be planted by ourselves and we could control the pesticide to make sure they are green and clean. All in all, it depends on what kind of life that people prefer. Personally, reside in metropolis area is better to earn some improvements. However, people provide little time to taking a trip to the rural region in gaining a quiet life.
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in the rural area or city.

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do urbanization is
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great jobs and higher income. They could
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different
. The
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one is transportations and infrastructure are accessible
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. When spending
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in the rural region,
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have struggle like the difficulty in finding bus if they want to take a trip or go to a hospital.
However
,
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options of
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as easy as pie and the bumpy road is not as much as in the
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town.

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hand,
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in my hometown always have a talk every morning or afternoon and say hi if
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meet
without stopping, including strangers.
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, this
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never feel alone.
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to societies in the urban neighborhood
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would breathe fresh air which we can not
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and closer to nature. It could happen
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because
there are
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plenty
of huge trees and not much the traffic or the industrial noises.
Additionally
, kinds of vegetables could
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ourselves and
we could control the pesticide to
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make
sure they are green and clean.

All in all, it depends on what kind of
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life
that
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people
prefer.
Personally
, reside in metropolis area is better to earn
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some
improvements.
However
,
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people
provide
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time to taking a trip to the rural region in gaining a quiet
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life
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that cities are the best places to live Others prefer to live in a rural area Compare the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
338 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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