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some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. OVVAN
Choosing major stream or subjects is an burgeoning issue. Many individuals are of opinion that students should choose the field on their own which they like. Yet, others of opinion that choosing subjects or majoring in field that relates to future development such as science and technology can be beneficial. In my opinion, majoring in whatever they like is more important and I shall discuss both views in the following paragraphs. Firstly, students are given their freedom to choose their field, subjects in this modern era. So, as per their opinion, they will study with great interest and attention, as a result, they will achieve their success and fulfill their dreams. Secondly, students will be free from pressure and stress. Fore example, years ago, parents used to peer children to choose field what parents like, which resulted in stress, physical and mental disturbance like headache, amnesia etcetera. On the other hand, as this is an modern era, most of the products in our daily life is replaced with technology. In other way, our ancestors used pigeons for communicating but now we are using smart phones for communicating. However, it will be furthermore developed in future so, studying subjects related to technology advancely will benefit students in achieving jobs easily. Furthermore, due to hectic life many people started to consume pills for healthy life instead of food. This may be replaced completely with pills in future. There by choosing subjects related to science benefit students. In conclusion, it can be reiterated that selecting whatever students like and choosing depending on future has their own advantages. However, in my opinion, studying in what we are interested will make our life happy and help in achieving our dreams.
Choosing major stream or
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subjects
is
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an
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individuals are of
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opinion
that
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students
should choose the
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field
on their
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own
which they like.
Yet
, others of
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opinion
that choosing
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subjects
or majoring in
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field
that relates to
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future
development such as science and technology can be beneficial. In my
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opinion
, majoring in whatever they like is more
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important
and I shall discuss both views in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
,
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students
are
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given
their freedom to choose their
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field
,
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subjects
in this modern era.
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So
, as per their
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opinion
, they will study with great interest and attention,
as a result
, they will achieve their success and fulfill their dreams.
Secondly
,
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students
will be free from pressure and
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stress
. Fore example, years ago, parents
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used
to peer children to choose
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field
what parents like, which resulted in
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stress
, physical and mental disturbance like headache, amnesia etcetera.
On the other hand
, as this is
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an
modern era, most of the products in our daily
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life
is replaced
with technology. In other way, our ancestors
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used
pigeons for communicating
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but
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now
we are using smart phones for communicating.
However
, it will be
furthermore
developed in
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future
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so
, studying
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subjects
related to technology
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advancely
will benefit
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students
in achieving jobs
easily
.
Furthermore
, due to hectic
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life
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many
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people
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started
to consume pills for healthy
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life
instead
of food. This may
be replaced
completely with pills in
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future
. There by choosing
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subjects
related to science benefit
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students
.
In conclusion
, it can
be reiterated
that selecting whatever
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students
like and choosing depending on
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future
has their
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own
advantages.
However
, in my
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opinion
, studying in what we
are interested
will
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make
our
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life
happy and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in achieving our dreams.
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IELTS essay some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

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