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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work

Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work 1Vod7

It is argued by the certain people that volunteer work ought to be done by adolescents. In this way, teenagers as well as community get more profits. I don't completely agree with this viewpoint. Commencing with the most predominant point in the favour of unpaid work, students can enhance their knowledge if they do free work. To elaborate it, when youngsters do job, they will meet new people. They can know others culture, ritual and tradition. Due to this, learners can improve their academics score in history subject. A survey conducted by the scholars of New York University that almost 35% of the young ones know others history because they give preference to do unpaid work. Thus, the effect that volunteer job have on people can be seen as beneficial in many ways. Moreover, there are a number of positives for societies as well. In this contemporary era, everyone has a hectic schedule as they are busy in their work and studies. They have not enough time to spend with their neighbours. However, if teens started to do work, they can share their views, opinions and ideas with other members of the society. Owing to this, they will make a strong bonding with others. For instance, in China, every year, the government of that nation organized a camp in which anyone can do volunteer work in order to clean their country. In this way, the dwellers of that nation can know others and make friends easily. Hence, it is a better way to improve communication skills and to spend some quality time with others. To conclude, there are numerous pros of doing unpaid work for people and society as one can gain more information about history and learn lots of skills.

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 by the certain You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 that volunteer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 ought to be done
 by adolescents. In this way, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
as well
 as community This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more profits. I don't completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this viewpoint.

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favour
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, students can enhance their knowledge if they do free You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
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. To elaborate it, when youngsters do job, they will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. They can know others culture, ritual and tradition. Due to this, learners can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 their academics score in history subject. A survey conducted by the scholars of New York University that almost 35% of the young ones know others history This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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work
. Thus
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people
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seen
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many
 ways.

Moreover
, there are a number of positives for societies as well
. In this contemporary era, everyone has a hectic schedule as they are busy in their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 and studies. They have not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
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neighbours
. However
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started
 to do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
, they can share their views, opinions and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
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other
 members of the society. Owing to this, they will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a strong bonding with others. For instance
, in China, every year, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 of that nation organized a camp in which anyone can do volunteer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in order to clean their country. In this way, the dwellers of that nation can know others and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 friends easily
. Hence
, it is a better way to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and to spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 quality time with others.

To conclude
, there are numerous pros of doing unpaid You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 and society as one can gain more information about history and learn lots of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. 