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Healthcare in rural areas

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The article discusses in-depth about the different methods to make healthcare accessible to people all around the world. According to physicians Raj Panjabi and Seth Berkley, combating the health gap is crucial, and thus they propose six strategies to do so. It is critical, in my opinion, to shed some light on this subject, especially given that we are now in the midst of a global epidemic. The COVID-19 pandemic showed the harsh reality of inequality. The lower and middle classes are struggling to obtain basic treatments, as a result they suffer greatly from the pandemic. Whereas the upper class does not face the same amount of difficulties.
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methods to
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healthcare accessible to
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people
all around the world. According to physicians Raj
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Panjabi
and Seth Berkley, combating the health gap is crucial, and
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they propose six strategies to do
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. It is critical, in my opinion, to shed
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some
light on this subject,
especially
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given
that we are
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now
in the midst of a global epidemic. The COVID-19 pandemic
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showed
the harsh reality of inequality. The lower and middle classes are struggling to obtain basic treatments,
as a result
they suffer
greatly
from the pandemic.
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the upper
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class
does not face the same amount of difficulties.
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IELTS essay Healthcare in rural areas

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
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