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do you think that althletes recieve so much money ? Why and why not

do you think that althletes recieve so much money? Why and why not JKqgE
either overpaying for professional sport people or not is a controvesial problem. More people think that income of althletes raising rapidly year after year. Constrastly, another group think it is very reasonable to pay a huge of interests for people working through sport event. In my own view, I think salaries that sport people gain is very easy to understand. On the one hand, the group have negative views about this issues, which so stupid to support this idea. That so unbiased to compare the salary between famous sporters and blue collars, who devote both physical and metal strength to build ultimate value of every aspect of social
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overpaying for professional sport
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or not is a
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problem. More
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people
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that income of
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althletes
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year after year.
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, another group
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very
reasonable to pay
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a huge of
interests for
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people
working through sport
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event
. In my
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view, I
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salaries that sport
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people
gain is
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very
easy to understand. On the one hand, the group have
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negative
views about
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this
issues, which
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so
stupid to support this
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idea
. That
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unbiased to compare the salary between
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famous
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sporters
and blue collars, who devote both physical and metal strength to build ultimate value of every aspect of
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social

IELTS essay do you think that althletes recieve so much money? Why and why not

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