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do you think that althletes recieve so much money ? Why and why not

do you think that althletes recieve so much money? Why and why not JKqgE
either overpaying for professional sport people or not is a controvesial problem. More people think that income of althletes raising rapidly year after year. Constrastly, another group think it is very reasonable to pay a huge of interests for people working through sport event. In my own view, I think salaries that sport people gain is very easy to understand. On the one hand, the group have negative views about this issues, which so stupid to support this idea. That so unbiased to compare the salary between famous sporters and blue collars, who devote both physical and metal strength to build ultimate value of every aspect of social
either
overpaying for professional sport
people
or not is a
controvesial
problem. More
people
think
that income of
althletes
raising
rapidly
year after year.
Constrastly
, another group
think
it is
very
reasonable to pay
a huge of
interests for
people
working through sport
event
. In my
own
view, I
think
salaries that sport
people
gain is
very
easy to understand. On the one hand, the group have
negative
views about
this
issues, which
so
stupid to support this
idea
. That
so
unbiased to compare the salary between
famous
sporters
and blue collars, who devote both physical and metal strength to build ultimate value of every aspect of
social
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IELTS essay do you think that althletes recieve so much money? Why and why not

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