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Some people think that all children should learn geography in school. However… October 30, 2018 By bw However…some others think that it is more important to learn subjects that are more relevant to life. What is your opinion? v. 1

It is true that studying Geography in school is important. I agree partially with this opinion and also supports that studying other important subjects like Science, Mathematics, Tecnology and English are also most vital than studying Geography only, especially STEM subjects. To begin with, by studying Geography, one can acquire knowledge about the Earth, the Oceans and the mountains and their range in different countries of the world. But on the other hand, in this era of information technology all the above mentioned information and maps and current weather reports are available instaneously on personal computers, smart phones, via Google search engine. Even uneducated also able to understand it thouroughly. Hence studying Geography in depth is not essential at higher education or primary education levels. However basic knowledge in Geography in essential for every student. On the contrary, familiarity or knowledge in other life essential or science subjects like STEM-Science, Techonology, English and Mathematics are highly desirable in this current age of neck throat competition to get a job in market in order to survive. For example, in a survey conducted by British primary and higher education council, few years ago 90 % of pupils have chosen STEM subjects after their graduation compared to Social sciences and Arts. Not only for job purpose, Science gives valuable knowledge in day to day needs and at times saves the life of fellow passengers in the form of first aid for instance in a road traffic accidents or plain crashes. In addition, being expert in English language, one can manage in all over the world, even without further gross knowledge in other subjects as people will be impressed by language skills and respond to help us. To conclude, choosing only Geography and devoting all time on it is not much productive, in comparison to STEM subjects in terms of future job and learning life skills.

IELTS essay Some people think that all children should learn geography in school. However… October 30, 2018 By bw However…some others think that it is more important to learn subjects that are more relevant to life. What is your opinion? v.1

It is true that
studying
Geography
in school is
important
. I
agree
partially
with this opinion and
also
supports that
studying
other
important
subjects
like
Science
, Mathematics,
Tecnology
and English are
also
most vital than
studying
Geography
only
,
especially
STEM subjects.

To
begin
with, by
studying
Geography
, one can acquire
knowledge
about the Earth, the Oceans and the mountains and their range in
different
countries of the world.
But
on the
other
hand, in this era of information technology all the above mentioned information and maps and
current
weather reports are available
instaneously
on personal computers, smart phones, via Google search engine. Even uneducated
also
able to understand it
thouroughly
.
Hence
studying
Geography
in depth is not essential at higher education or primary education levels.
However
basic
knowledge
in
Geography
in essential for every student.

On the contrary
, familiarity or
knowledge
in
other
life essential or
science
subjects
like STEM-Science,
Techonology
, English and Mathematics are
highly
desirable in this
current
age of neck throat competition to
get
a job in market in order to survive.
For example
, in a survey conducted by British primary and higher education council, few years ago 90 % of pupils have chosen STEM
subjects
after their graduation compared to Social
sciences
and Arts. Not
only
for job purpose,
Science
gives valuable
knowledge
in day to day needs and at times saves the life of fellow passengers in the form of
first
aid
for instance
in a road traffic accidents or plain crashes.
In addition
, being expert in English language, one can manage in all over the world, even without
further
gross
knowledge
in
other
subjects
as
people
will
be impressed
by language
skills
and respond to
help
us.

To conclude
, choosing
only
Geography
and devoting all time on it is not much productive,
in comparison
to STEM
subjects
in terms of future job and learning life
skills
.
18Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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