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some people think that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school.

some people think that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school. WGjX5
it is known that children in primary school are more convenient and they can explore new things more easily, therefore if they learn foreign language from the time they start school it will consider them to assimilate more foreign languages in future. in addition, in future it will help them to find financially good work, because today it is impossible to get a high paid job if you don’t know at least one foreign language. so i think that then children will still have to learn foreign languages in future and if they start to explore in a primary school it will be excellent for only them.
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convenient and
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from the time they
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school it will consider them to assimilate more
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addition, in future it will
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help them to find
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in future and if they
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IELTS essay some people think that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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