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young people who commit serious crimes suchas pinished in the same way as adult.to what extent do you agree or disagree

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materialism causes greed and crime. teenagers may involved in these crimes. The age group of criminals has controversial. some people believe that the youngsters who break the law should be punished in the similar method as adult. i agree with this statement. Nowadays, most crimes are commited by jueniles because of their age, some people are utilizing it for their financial growth such as smugglingroberry, murder and so on. The equality of punishment leads to prevent the rate of child use of crimes. crime considered as a crime.
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materialism
causes greed and
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crime
.
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teenagers
may involved in these
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crimes
. The age group of criminals has controversial.
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some
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people
believe that the youngsters who break the law should
be punished
in the similar method as adult.
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i
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agree
with this statement. Nowadays, most
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crimes
are
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commited
by
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jueniles
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because
of their age,
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some
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people
are utilizing it for their financial growth such as
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smugglingroberry
, murder and
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on. The equality of punishment leads to
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prevent
the rate of child
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use
of
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crimes
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crime
considered as a
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IELTS essay young people who commit serious crimes suchas pinished in the same way as adult.

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