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Some people think that advertising on TV is useful for viewers, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion v.1

Some people think that advertising on TV is useful for viewers, while others disagree. 1
Some people think that watching advertisement on the television has a significant amount of benefits, while others think that it has numerous negative side effects. In my view, it's good to watch ads over small screen industry for a limited period of time. However, this essay will discuss both views of the statement. On the one hand, there are a large number of positive impacts by watching the adverts over the TV's. Firstly, Ads will bring the break for the continuous watching of the screen. It's good to have a small gap for the viewer since they have been watching various programmes from the early hours of the day. For instance, consider any movie, which usually took around 3 hours so it's difficult to watch for longer period without any pause. Secondly, by watching the ad-programs, one can increase their thinking abilities. People will start brushing their visual as well presentation efforts with a unique way, particularly in children, their analytical capabilities will increase to higher levels. On the other hand, the public will start using the negative feedback products in the adverts. With limited information only, people tend to use instantly as a result, it will lead to the wrong impression on the adverts. In addition that, people will loss their interest to watch the TV's if suddenly any ad came to screen when they are watching any of their favourite programmes. Moreover, when watching a series on the small screen at home, by adding adverts time it usually taking more time than the actual hours of program. To conclude, in my view, by considering the positives and negative effects, watching ads over TVs at a reasonable amount of period will bring a healthy environment to public.
Some
people
think
that watching advertisement on the television has a significant amount of benefits, while others
think
that it has numerous
negative
side effects. In my view, it's
good
to
watch
ads over
small
screen
industry for a limited period of time.
However
, this essay will discuss both views of the statement.

On the one hand, there are
a large number of
positive
impacts by watching the adverts over the TV's.
Firstly
, Ads will bring the break for the continuous watching of the
screen
. It's
good
to have a
small
gap for the viewer since they have been watching various
programmes
from the early hours of the day.
For instance
, consider any movie, which
usually
took around 3 hours
so
it's difficult to
watch
for longer period without any pause.
Secondly
, by watching the ad-programs, one can increase their thinking abilities.
People
will
start
brushing their visual
as well
presentation efforts with a unique way,
particularly
in children, their analytical capabilities will increase to higher levels.

On the other hand
, the public will
start
using the
negative
feedback products in the adverts. With limited information
only
,
people
tend to
use
instantly
as a result
, it will lead to the
wrong
impression on the adverts. In
addition
that,
people
will loss their interest to
watch
the TV's if
suddenly
any ad came to
screen
when they are watching any of their
favourite
programmes
.
Moreover
, when watching a series on the
small
screen
at home, by adding adverts time it
usually
taking more time than the actual hours of program.

To conclude
, in my view, by considering the positives and
negative
effects, watching ads over TVs at a reasonable amount of period will bring a healthy environment to public.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that advertising on TV is useful for viewers, while others disagree. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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