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Some people think that advertisement is important to gives the information,while other think that it provide false ℹ️ related to any product,discuss both give your opinion.

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It is believed by the masses that advertising is useful and informative tachnique, whilst, other host of society intrust that such activities provide false information in order to accelerate the price and services of a particular product. Therefor, I am prone to the initial argument and both the aspects will be explaine along with a subsequent opinion in the following paragraph. On the first phase, there are myriads of benefits to advert the product. The most prominent one is the depth of knowledge which comes through ads, which access to increase awareness about the quality and availability of a single product in the society as well as proper information related to any brand. To cite an example of apple iphone brand, which was not well know in initial years and become most popular due to the advertisement. Another one is, value of things has been expanding due to the circulation of products which grow the interest of every person. Contrarily, advertising the consumer goods has some pitfalls in the world. The first dominance of this is harrassment which caused by some people who mislead the products like faulty products which always hidden and also gone for advertisement. Another one is, no accessibility to mislead the errors of this, due to which some bad people grab this advantage without realise the empact of this in society. For an instance, producing the advertisement of junkfood in various way to influence the world without telling the harmful effect of eating them. As for as, I believe that advertisement of products is not only contribute the development of the world to be updated with the latest product but also makes the denizens more conscious to choos a product that what is suitable for them. To recapitulate, it is obvious that advertising the products has both post and negative outcomes in the society, As it brings the popularity of each brand of any company. however, it's provides demand and incremental in price more.
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by the masses that advertising is useful and informative
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tachnique
, whilst, other host of
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society
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intrust
that such activities provide false information in order to accelerate the price and services of a particular
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product
. Therefor, I am prone to the initial argument and both the aspects will be
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explaine
along with a subsequent opinion in the following paragraph.

On the
first
phase, there are myriads of benefits to advert the
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product
. The most prominent one is the depth of knowledge which
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comes
through ads, which access to increase awareness about the quality and availability of a single
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product
in the
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society
as well
as proper information related to any brand. To cite an example of
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apple
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iphone
brand, which was not well know in initial years and become most popular due to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
advertisement
. Another one is, value of things has been expanding due to the circulation of
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products
which grow the interest of every person.

Contrarily
, advertising the consumer
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goods
has
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some
pitfalls in the world. The
first
dominance of this is
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harrassment
which caused by
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some
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people
who mislead the
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products
like faulty
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products
which always hidden and
also
gone for
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advertisement
. Another one is, no accessibility to mislead the errors of this, due to which
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some
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bad
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people
grab this advantage without
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realise
the
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empact
of this in
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society
. For an instance, producing the
The usual collocation for "advertisement" is "for" not "of". Did you mean "advertisement for"?
advertisement of
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junkfood
in various way to influence the world without telling the harmful effect of eating them.

As for as, I believe that
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advertisement of
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products
is not
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only
contribute the development of the world to
be updated
with the latest
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product
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but
also
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makes
the denizens more conscious to
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choos
a
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product
that what is suitable for them.

To recapitulate, it is obvious that advertising the
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products
has both post and
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negative
outcomes in the
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society
, As it brings the popularity of each brand of any
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company
.
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however
, it's provides demand and incremental in price more.
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IELTS essay Some people think that advertisement is important to gives the information, while other think that it provide false ℹ️ related to any product,

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5 paragraphs
328 words
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