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Is your pets good companions ?

Is your pets good companions ? o1rrb

It is estimated that each Viet Nam family has at least three or four pets. In my knowledge, pets are good companions. This is true because my brother is a dog. The name's youngest child is Light. My brother has a lot of talent. Beside looking good at home with the loud noises. Light usually tail then put the hand together and put them up and down when members of my family come back home. When I feel bad, he consoles me by stroke me and looks at me with glisten eyes. I have so much fun with everything which he makes. On the other hand, he has a vice that he is embarrassed when a person looks at him eating. That makes my family laugh. Also, Light is so afraid and trembles with cold because of it's rain. I love my brother and other pets. So I hate people torturing pets and eating dog's and cat's meat. Pets have the same emotions as humans. Look at pets as good companions.

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