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Nowadays,the way of interacting has changed because of technology.technology is affect relationship.is this positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the way of interacting has changed because of technology. technology is affect relationship. is this positive or negative development? NW66N

In the system Recently people are using to communicate with each other has changed owing to technology. Technology is affecting the relationship. in the forthcoming paragraphs I will analyze the statement and try to reach whether it is positive or negative development. To begin with, technology has made the communication stystem easier. Nowadays interaction with other can be done within a minute. Distance don't matter these days. For instance, the people who are working abroad and living without their family can easily interact and lessen distance. However, the concept working from home has introduced by the progress of technology. Moreover, online shopping has provided the best opportunity of shopping from home. Again, in the COVID period people were confined in their home while technology has fulfilled our all shorts of demand such as recreation, education, shopping, socialism etc. On the contrary, it has some drawbacks too. a plethora of times people get stuck in some problem because of the technology. some people use it in illegal work. misuse of technology make some problem. In my opinion, technology is providing a great previliage and it is clearly a positive development. To sum up, therefore, techno has open a great window toward modern society however, the user should be conscious of using.

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people
 are using to communicate with each other has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
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technology
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Technology
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in
 the forthcoming paragraphs I will analyze the statement and try to reach whether it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 development.

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begin
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technology
 has made the communication Possible spelling mistake found.systemsty stem
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 easier. Nowadays interaction with other can be done
 within a minute. Distance don't matter these days. For instance
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who are working abroad and living without their family can easily
 interact and lessen distance. However
, the concept working from home has introduced by the progress of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
. Moreover
, online shopping has provided the best opportunity of shopping from home.

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COVID
 period You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
were confined
 in their home while You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 has fulfilled our all shorts of demand such as recreation, education, shopping, socialism etc.

On the contrary
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some
 drawbacks too. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterA
a
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people
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get
 stuck in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 problem This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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technology
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSome
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it in illegal work. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMisuse
misuse
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 problem.

In my opinion, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 is providing a great Possible spelling mistake found.privilegeprevailingrevilingpreimageprevising
previliage
 and it is clearly
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 development.

To sum up, therefore
, techno has open a great window toward modern society however
, the user should be conscious of using. 