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Some people think schools should group pupils according to their academic ability, but others believe pupils with different abilities should be educated together. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the developing world every pupil has their own ability on every subject. It is believed by many people that scholars should be taught by looking at their abilities or talents at school, while others including me think that they should all study in the same class. In this essay I will discuss both sides and provide my opinion before giving logical conclusion. On the one hand, separating pupils according to their abilities can be advisable for several reasons. Firstly, if scholars are separated into groups, intelligent or talented pupils can learn faster than mixed class and. It is because, in the mixed classes always have different characters such as lower students always disturb top students during the lessons by conversations with each other or shouting in the class. Thus, in many schools learners should be educated separately. On the other hand, some people including me say that it will be harmful for lower students, if they are separated. Obviously, people always learn something from intelligent or talented people in every field particularly in places of learning. In other words, separating learners into groups will effect negatively to scholars motivation. In addition to this, their interests of living and learning will decrease sharply, therefore, they cannot find their own way in their future because of not well educated. This could be because, the most teachers do not teach well if they have not top students. For example, of course there are people who do not want to study but if they are studied with highly intelligent pupils in the same class, they want to imitate them. Therefore, schools do not need to group students. To conclude, it seems to me that students should study together but also have some classes focus on their major. With week students, schools should have some extra coaching for them so that students can develop comprehensively and yet maintain the effectiveness.
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ability on every subject. It
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people
that scholars should
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school
, while others including me
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think
that they should all study in the same
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class
. In this essay I will discuss both sides and provide my opinion
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before
giving logical conclusion.

On the one hand, separating
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pupils
according to their abilities can be advisable for several reasons.
Firstly
, if scholars
are separated
into groups, intelligent or talented
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pupils
can learn faster than mixed
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class
and. It is
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because
, in the mixed
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classes
always have
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different
characters such as lower
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students
always disturb top
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students
during the lessons by conversations with each
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other
or shouting in the
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class
.
Thus
, in
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schools
learners should
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separately
.

On the
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hand,
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people
including me say that it will be harmful for lower
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students
, if they
are separated
.
Obviously
,
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people
always learn something from intelligent or talented
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people
in every field
particularly
in places of learning. In
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other
words, separating learners into groups will
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effect
negatively
to scholars motivation.
In addition
to this, their interests of living and learning will decrease
sharply
,
therefore
, they cannot find their
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own
way in their future
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because
of not
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well educated
. This could be
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because
, the most teachers do not teach well if they have not top
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students
.
For example
,
of course
there are
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people
who do not want to study
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but
if they
are studied
with
highly
intelligent
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pupils
in the same
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class
, they want to imitate them.
Therefore
,
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schools
do not need to group students.

To conclude
, it seems to me that
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students
should study together
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but
also
have
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some
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classes
focus on their major. With week
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students
,
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schools
should have
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some
extra coaching for them
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so
that
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students
can develop
comprehensively
and
yet
maintain the effectiveness.
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IELTS essay Some people think schools should group pupils according to their academic ability, but others believe pupils with different abilities should be educated together.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
316 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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