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Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Society has some rules and regulations to be obeyed. Some people believe that these restrictions help the society to function well. This essay will argue why laws and restrictions are undoubtedly crucial in maintaining the society balance. Firstly and foremost, laws and regulations are entirely needed in creating a peaceful environment with civilized people live there. Rules and restrictions usually come with the punishments for those who break it. Thus, it will make people who have a plan to do criminal think twice. As a clear example, when people go to the shopping mall and they have the idea to rob some of the goods, they will think again since they know the consequences they will get. Through this point of view, laws and regulations has a big impact in maintaining the peacefulness in a society. Furthermore, laws play an important role in controlling human bad nature. Human has its own atrocious nature and will emerged in some occasions, such as no-rules situation. A very intriguing research article published by The Journal of Human Behavior suggested that if human being put in a situation where they have rights to do everything and, of course, no rules limit them, they will create a lot of chaos and other uncivilized actions. Thus, restrictions in a society greatly help human in controlling their bad nature. This essay argued why laws and regulations help the society to function well. In my opinion, human absolutely need regulations as well as laws in helping the society keep its balance.
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has
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some
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rules
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regulations
to
be obeyed
.
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people
believe that these
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restrictions
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help
the
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society
to function well. This essay will argue why
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laws
and
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restrictions
are
undoubtedly
crucial in maintaining the
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society
balance.

Firstly
and foremost,
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laws
and
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regulations
are
entirely
needed in creating a peaceful environment with civilized
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people
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live
there.
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and
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restrictions
usually
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come
with the punishments for those who break it.
Thus
, it will
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make
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people
who have a plan to do criminal
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think
twice. As a
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example, when
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people
go to the shopping
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mall and
they have the
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idea
to rob
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some of the
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goods
, they will
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think
again since they know the consequences they will
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get
. Through this point of view,
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laws
and
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regulations
has a
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big
impact in maintaining the peacefulness in a society.

Furthermore
,
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laws
play an
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important
role in controlling
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human
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bad
nature.
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Human
has its
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own
atrocious nature and will
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emerged
in
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some
occasions, such as no-
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rules
situation. A
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very
intriguing research article published by The Journal of
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Human
Behavior suggested that if
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human
being put
in a situation where they have rights to do everything and,
of course
, no
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rules
limit them, they will create
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a lot of
chaos and other uncivilized actions.
Thus
,
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restrictions
in a
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society
greatly
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help
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human
in controlling their
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bad
nature.

This essay argued why
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laws
and
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regulations
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help
the
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society
to function well. In my opinion,
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human
absolutely
need
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regulations
as well
as
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laws
in helping the
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society
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keep
its balance.
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IELTS essay Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. with the above statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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