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Some people think money osvaldo the major source to happiness. Do you agree or disagree??

Some people think money osvaldo the major source to happiness. ? dlKbK

It is argued that some think that money is the main source to be happy. This essay agrees with this statement because we need money to survive and without it would be impossible to acquire elemental things we need in our daily life. To begin with, having a great capital is important as economy is expensive up-to-date. Many people need to get medicines and medical services which are not inexpensive and mostly of them cannot afford to pay that. Besides, in poor countries the lack of savings is well known because salaries are not as high as in rich nations. Recent research concluded that poor people might tend to struggle. Some do not have the opportunity to buy clothes, food, shelter and many other necessities in life. Therefore, the context in which a person lives is large part of their happiness. Secondly, money help us to get some freedom or independence. This is particularly the opportunity to make the most of our skills and talents, the ability to choose our own course in life, financial security and much more, which of course bring a smile and happiness to our and our family lives. Moreover, a research has shown that spending money on others makes us happier than spending money on ourselves and doing small acts of kindness increases life satisfaction. In conclusion, there are people who consider that having finances is the ultimate source of happiness because money is quite significant to stand and not having it we cannot solve our basic needs.

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some
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think
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money
 is the main source to be happy. This essay This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesces
agrees
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because
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need
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money
 to survive and without it would be impossible to acquire elemental things we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 in our daily life.

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begin
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important
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people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 medicines and medical services which are not inexpensive and mostly
 of them cannot afford to pay that. Besides
, in poor countries the lack of savings is well known This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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people
 might tend to struggle. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
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buy
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many
 other necessities in life. Therefore
, the context in which a person This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 is large part of their happiness.

Secondly
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money
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help
 us to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 freedom or independence. This is particularly
 the opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the most of our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and talents, the ability to choose our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 course in life, financial security and much more, which of course
 bring a smile and happiness to our and our family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. Moreover
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a research
 has shown that spending You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 on others This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 us happier than spending You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 on ourselves and doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 acts of kindness increases life satisfaction.

In conclusion
, there are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who consider that having finances is the ultimate source of happiness This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 is quite significant to stand and not having it we cannot solve our basic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
needs
. 