Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

some people think mobile can be use in studies while other disagree with it

some people think mobile can be use in studies while other disagree with it 66Doj

The use of mobile phones has always been a hot topic for discussion. Many people believe that cell phone should be prohibited in the academic area while other think smartphone could help students in their Studies. I extremely disagree with Allowing the use of Mobile in schools or colleges. in this essay, I'll be discussing both prospects along with examples of my opinion. Technology can be beneficial for students due to many reasons. one of the major factors is a connection with the global network. Mobile phones allow the user to access with all over the world from where one can take help about their difficulty in learning. For instance, there is a list of learning platforms that are available to provide help in academic activities such as YouTube, Khan Academy, and many others. These websites provide a proper solution for students in their hurdles. On the other hand, A group of people doesn't allow such devices in the Educational Department for several reasons. First of all, there is always a high risk of the misuse of technology. It could be dangerous for the growing age of students if they are not guided fairly. furthermore, by use of smart devices in academic areas can be the reason for inequality. Such as, a study conducted in a local school indicates that many rich children with their expensive gadgets impact very badly on those, who can't afford these things. Hence it is sufficient to say that different technologies could be used in the education department with check and balance. However, I firmly believe it should be discouraged by authorities.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of mobile phones has always been a hot topic for discussion. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 believe that cell phone should be prohibited
 in the academic area while other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 smartphone could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 in their Studies. I extremely
 disagree with Allowing the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of Mobile in schools or colleges. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 this essay, I'll be discussing both prospects along with examples of my opinion.

Technology can be beneficial for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 reasons. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOne
one
 of the major factors is a connection with the global network. Mobile phones This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 the user to access with all over the world from where one can take This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 about their difficulty in learning. For instance
, there is a list of learning platforms that are available to provide This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in academic activities such as YouTube, Khan Academy, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 others. These websites provide a proper solution for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 in their hurdles.

On the other hand
, A group of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 doesn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 such devices in the Educational Department for several reasons. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, there is always a high This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 of the misuse of technology. It could be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 for the growing age of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 if they are not guided fairly
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFurthermore
furthermore
, by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of smart devices in academic areas can be the reason for inequality. Such as, a study conducted in a local school indicates that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 rich children with their expensive gadgets impact This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
badly
 on those, who can't afford these things.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 it is sufficient to say that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 technologies could be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in the education department with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 and balance. However
, I firmly
 believe it should be discouraged
 by authorities. 