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Car ownership has increased over past thrity years.

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Auto ownership has now become one of the priorities of human life. This process was running from last three decades. This notion is true that numerous urban areas in the world becoming ‘one vast traffic jam’. As with the soaring ownership, people ought to face a plethora of problems. This essay will shed a light on its cause, effect and how to alleviate this problem. With this invention people started to feel shame in going by bus or any public transport and felt that it is not time friendly. Whereas, going by wagon is more time-consuming due to the fact now all have their own vehicle consequently all prefer to go by van every day as they have busy schedule so there is a huge traffic jam on roads. Cars, a heavenly thing, now becoming a thing of death. As it emits smoke and usually run on fuel, which is very limited. Its effects are worse. First, it is making aur dirty. Second, in road congestion there is blowing of horns, which generally disturbs the natives by causing noise pollution. Using car also have great impact on natural resources in negative way. So, there are some measures to follow, governments have to make the public transport better for use. It is also a responsibility of people to use carpool for a day it is not only time saving but also environmentally friendly. To conclude, it is duty of our world to save nature as well as time because they both are too precious to waste. So by using above methods paired with our consciousness we rescue the earth from unimagined destruction.
Auto ownership has
now
become one of the priorities of human life. This process was running from last three decades. This notion is true that numerous urban areas in the world becoming ‘one vast traffic jam’. As with the soaring ownership,
people
ought to face a plethora of problems. This essay will shed a light on its cause, effect and how to alleviate this problem. With this invention
people
started
to feel shame in going by bus or any public transport and felt that it is not time friendly. Whereas, going by wagon is more time-consuming due to the fact
now
all have their
own
vehicle
consequently
all prefer to go by van every day as they have busy schedule
so
there is a huge traffic jam on roads. Cars, a heavenly thing,
now
becoming a thing of death. As it emits smoke and
usually
run on fuel, which is
very
limited. Its effects are worse.
First
, it is making
aur
dirty. Second, in road congestion there is blowing of horns, which
generally
disturbs the natives by causing noise pollution. Using car
also
have great impact on natural resources in
negative
way.

So
, there are
some
measures to follow,
governments
have to
make
the public transport better for
use
. It is
also
a responsibility of
people
to
use
carpool for a day it is not
only
time saving
but
also
environmentally
friendly.
To conclude
, it is duty of our world to save nature
as well
as time
because
they both are too precious to waste.
So
by using above methods paired with our consciousness we rescue the earth from unimagined destruction.
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IELTS essay Car ownership has increased over past thrity years.

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