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some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Friends play a major role in everyone's life. Being with friends some feel secure, entertained, annoyed and discouraged. People think that they are blessed if they get friends who always agree to them. At the other end, some people think it's always best if they get friends who always disagree with them. In one of the scenarios, it's really good if you have friends who always agree to your points because they always had more value to what you are thinking. For example, if you have a plan of doing a particular think and you are unsure about how to proceed further and you are looking for a help. Suddenly, you remember one of your friends who always agrees with you and he might be able to help you with adding more flavors to your plan which can help you executing your thoughts. In the other scenario, if you have a plan to throw a surprise party for your one of the family members and for that you have done a good field work. As soon as you share with your friends to get his/her thoughts on this same and to your surprise if your friend completely dislikes your plan and gives you his/her own opinion which you may not like. That kind of incident might hurt you or make you feel discouraged. In my opinion, if a person has a friend who is always there to correct, guide and support him/her then the life becomes more graceful. Being in a company of friends who always agree to your points no matter you are right or wrong always has a drop back because you're just in fake friendship. To conclude with, friends are always an angel sent by God. It just that sometime we find hard time to identify some genuine friendship. That's why some has said that A friend in need is a friend in deed.
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play a major role in everyone's life. Being with
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always disagree with them. In one of the scenarios, it's
really
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if you have
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friends
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always
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to your points
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because
they always had more value to what you are thinking.
For example
, if you have a
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plan
of doing a particular
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think and
you are unsure about how to proceed
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further and
you are looking for a
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help
.
Suddenly
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friends
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who
always
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agrees
with you and he might be able to
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help
you with adding more flavors to your
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plan
which can
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help
you
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executing
your thoughts. In the other scenario, if you have a
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plan
to throw a surprise party for
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your
one of the family members and for that you have done a
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good
field work. As
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soon
as you share with your
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friends
to
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get
his/her thoughts on this same and to your surprise if your
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friend
completely dislikes your
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plan
and gives you his/her
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own
opinion which you may not like. That kind of incident might hurt you or
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make
you feel discouraged. In my opinion, if a person has a
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friend
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who
is always there to correct, guide and support him/her then the life becomes more graceful. Being in a
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company
of
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friends
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who
always
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agree
to your points no matter you are right or
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wrong
always has a drop back
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because
you're
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just
in fake friendship.
To conclude
with,
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friends
are always an angel
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sent
by God. It
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just
that sometime we find
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hard
time to identify
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some
genuine friendship. That's why
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some
has said that A
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friend
in need is a
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friend
in deed.
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IELTS essay some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.

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