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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words

Being a parent of someone is not a cup of tea of someone’s. But still it’s a pleasure to do this job. I think it is very important to learn to be a parent while schooling. But, in upcoming paragraphs I shall discuss the both perspective of this essay. Firstly, I will start with the importance of learning about parenthood in early stages of young life. Every individual needs to know about the real facts of life like they should learn to care about others. I think this is a way they can learn about what their parents are doing for them. And as well they will start caring about other’s life. Teacher can provide each child a baby toy to pamper them and tell them to feed and wipe them on time. In this way students also enjoy the school time. In addition, children can make these things as their hobby for their leisure time rather using that on television or on phone. On other hand, getting to know about the big burden of upcoming age can may lead a child to difficult situation like they can skip their childhood and lead to any dangerous situation. Pupils may get mentally disturb with those activities. On contrary, they should enjoy playing and must be free minded than to start handling responsibility. Children are like plain paper what we tell them they will just copy that on theirselves. In nutshell, I would like to say that both aspects of teaching or not teaching about parenthood in schools are important in their own way.
Being a parent of someone is not a cup of tea of someone’s.
But
still
it’s a pleasure to do this job. I
think
it is
very
important
to learn to be a parent while schooling.
But
, in upcoming paragraphs I shall discuss the both perspective of this essay.
Firstly
, I will
start
with the importance of learning about parenthood in early stages of young life. Every individual needs to know about the real facts of life like they should learn to care about others. I
think
this is a way they can learn about what their parents are doing for them. And
as well
they will
start
caring about other’s life. Teacher can provide each child a baby toy to pamper them and
tell
them to feed and wipe them on time. In this way students
also
enjoy the school time.
In addition
, children can
make
these things as their hobby for their leisure time
rather
using that on television or on phone. On other hand, getting to know about the
big
burden of upcoming age can may lead a child to difficult situation like they can skip their childhood and lead to any
dangerous
situation. Pupils may
get
mentally disturb with those activities. On contrary, they should enjoy playing and
must
be free minded than to
start
handling responsibility. Children are like plain paper what we
tell
them they will
just
copy that on
theirselves
. In nutshell, I would like to say that both aspects of teaching or not teaching about parenthood in schools are
important
in their
own
way.
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IELTS essay : Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
262 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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